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The Short Line (SL)
This forum is for posting short form poetry for comment and critique. You may find resource material on these and other forms in the "Poetic Forms" forum. Please post no more than two (2) poems per day and comment on at least two others for each one you post.

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Living Rural Fog rises above the morning dew, over lush green valleys, placid lakes and beyond rushing mountain streams, the air crisp and welcoming, it is beautiful and I am blessed... q... Started Oct 6^th, 2015 at 4:49am by Terry	1	112	Oct 18^th, 2015 at 1:47pm By: nas
Deception I don't do depression she said from behind granite walls of blank expression Started May 17^th, 2015 at 3:32pm by nas	5	84	May 26^th, 2015 at 6:13pm By: nas
Senryu knowledge kept secret is only thought to be so; the wise keep sharing Started Aug 5^th, 2014 at 4:26pm by Terry	3	73	May 26^th, 2015 at 8:39am By: Just_Daniel
strife cinquain... is strife merely a fight or more an attitude with no reconciliation in sight? Started Jun 6^th, 2012 at 1:50pm by Just_Daniel	3	40	May 26^th, 2015 at 8:36am By: Just_Daniel
Memorial Day Haiku Soldiers toil Through the grit and grime Respect deserved ~Davidf Started May 25^th, 2015 at 12:47pm by davidf	6	56	May 26^th, 2015 at 2:16am By: davidf
Going Bananas "Banana ice-cream," said the girl to the vendor "Banana?" replied the vendor, "Not chocolate or vanilla? "I don't think so," replied the girl, "It's for my pet gorilla". ~Davidf Started Oct 30^th, 2014 at 9:35pm by davidf	2	34	May 25^th, 2015 at 12:43pm By: davidf
Wild Orchids (Ghazal?) Everyone, I want to send this to a company that takes ghazals and other under-utilized poems...but first I need to know if it is a ghazal or not. I think so, because every other line has the rep... Started Aug 12^th, 2014 at 11:57pm by davidf	2	38	May 25^th, 2015 at 12:40pm By: davidf
Seasonal In the interval between sun and showers a single leaf falls. Independent hues from indigo to brown herald summer's end. Started Apr 6^th, 2015 at 6:54pm by nas	6	68	May 23^rd, 2015 at 6:57pm By: nas
Easter As Easter comes nearer and nearer The message should be clearer Jesus came to be our one protection In a holy resurrection Therefore it is meant Easter is truly Heaven sent.<b... Started Apr 2^nd, 2015 at 9:03pm by davidf	5	46	Apr 10^th, 2015 at 5:31pm By: davidf
Ramblings On A Grey Morning I'll have two eggs over easy, two pieces of bacon, tomato slices rather than hash browns, wheat toast with friendliness too start the day...thanks. Love is like breakfast... You s... Started Mar 25^th, 2015 at 9:23pm by Terry	5	58	Apr 6^th, 2015 at 10:17am By: nas
Shardoma Allowing happiness to be defined by another is a path to loneliness; need only look within. Started Oct 30^th, 2014 at 6:44pm by Terry	2	45	Nov 2^nd, 2014 at 5:57am By: Terry
Humpty's Last Hurrah After Humpty fell from the wall and died They put him in a pan to be fried Then they forgot his stunt on the wall He was only an egg, after all. Started Jun 16^th, 2013 at 10:47am by davidf	3	56	Aug 12^th, 2014 at 11:51pm By: davidf
Snow Show Snow falls gently on the ground not making a single sound It can be soft and pure, wild, or free, creating Wunter's pageantry! ~Davdf P.S. Before y'all say it, I know, beautif... Started Mar 19^th, 2013 at 6:49am by davidf	4	76	Aug 12^th, 2014 at 11:50pm By: davidf
Senryu wispy clouds above beautiful cascade mountain; gran-daughter kayaks Started Jul 31^st, 2014 at 4:11am by Terry	3	29	Aug 7^th, 2014 at 10:44pm By: davidf
Senryu beneath the arbor fallen grapes lay rotting; shaken...drunkard dies Started Aug 2^nd, 2014 at 8:56pm by Terry	3	39	Aug 7^th, 2014 at 10:42pm By: davidf
Humpty's Last Hurrah After Humpty fell from the wall and died They put him in a pan to be fried Then they forgot his stunt on the wall He was only an egg, after all. Started Jun 16^th, 2013 at 10:47am by davidf	3	50	Jul 24^th, 2014 at 8:57pm By: Terry
Remembering the Journey Friendships nurtured and enjoyed are like tall tales, ever changing ... Never forgotten. Terry Started Jul 3^rd, 2014 at 7:09am by Terry	2	63	Jul 10^th, 2014 at 5:20am By: Terry
Haiku crickets chirping don't know when to stop insomnia again ~Davidf Started Apr 28^th, 2013 at 10:03pm by davidf	3	32	Jun 16^th, 2013 at 10:43am By: davidf
Senryu caramel corn wedged between Grandpa's dentures ~Davidf Started Oct 23^rd, 2011 at 3:31pm by davidf	5	44	Jun 16^th, 2013 at 10:42am By: davidf
Haiku Sequence the bear tries hard for a taste of golden honey instead, he gets stung ouch! that must really hurt a lot, many may think -- it's un"bear"able ~David Fox Started Mar 10^th, 2012 at 12:56am by davidf	3	49	Apr 28^th, 2013 at 9:58pm By: davidf
From my island poems ... Cinquain as the afternoon grows in on itself, blue smoke from old fire rises, blends into the sky Started Mar 25^th, 2012 at 11:37am by WildCityWoman	5	51	Mar 19^th, 2013 at 6:39am By: davidf
Haiku little prints etched in white cat's first snow. ~Davidf Started Dec 3^rd, 2012 at 4:34am by davidf	3	40	Mar 19^th, 2013 at 6:34am By: davidf
Haiku Strawberries and cream Red-haired, fair-skinned girl Hates her nickname. ~Davidf Started Jul 21^st, 2011 at 1:13am by davidf	6	71	Dec 3^rd, 2012 at 4:29am By: davidf
RECOGNITION Her dreams un-veiled her hopes are high, her prayers fervent for child and family...her most ardent wish is happiness for all, her heart is kind, her home, a Story Book built on Love for all who ... Started May 10^th, 2012 at 7:29pm by Terry	2	63	Jul 3^rd, 2012 at 1:25pm By: davidf
Senryu/ No Cleansing Winds below, a windswept cloudless sky are deserts; thick with battles stench Started Mar 28^th, 2011 at 12:27am by Terry	5	91	May 10^th, 2012 at 1:05am By: Terry

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