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The Short Line (SL)
This forum is for posting short form poetry for comment and critique. You may find resource material on these and other forms in the "Poetic Forms" forum. Please post no more than two (2) poems per day and comment on at least two others for each one you post.

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Haiku [IMAGE] In dappled May sun I walked apart attended By the wind alone Started May 10^th, 2011 at 10:15am by Paul Sands	3	40	Jul 21^st, 2011 at 1:08am By: davidf
spiritual senryu... love your enemas and turn the other cheek; let it all go Started May 20^th, 2011 at 12:48pm by Just_Daniel	5	33	Jul 21^st, 2011 at 1:00am By: davidf
Haiku weeping branches fall blossoms splash in surging sea; everywhere sorrow Started Mar 16^th, 2011 at 2:57am by Terry	3	55	Apr 26^th, 2011 at 5:22pm By: Just_Daniel
Try Your Best In whatever you do, give it your all Whethere you're at your job or playing ball Because when you give your very best God will help with the rest. ~David Fox Started Mar 26^th, 2011 at 4:33pm by davidf	4	34	Apr 26^th, 2011 at 5:16pm By: Just_Daniel
Timely Cinquain in vain Lazarus tried to figure out the date when Jesus raised him... then he heard March forth! March fourth? I guess that means there were at least three more behind that rock inside... Started Mar 4^th, 2011 at 2:28pm by Just_Daniel	1	31	Mar 5^th, 2011 at 11:12pm By: davidf
Religious Haiku sometimes God touches your soul hugs from heaven ~Davidf Started Mar 3^rd, 2011 at 12:02am by davidf	2	22	Mar 4^th, 2011 at 1:46am By: Terry
briefly speaking... Concise is writing in your briefs to show off everything in much the way a bas-relief's an image with a zing. Started Feb 28^th, 2011 at 10:13pm by Just_Daniel	2	31	Mar 3^rd, 2011 at 3:47am By: Terry
Haiku moon and sun light path... ears hear only stories eyes speak only truth Started Feb 28^th, 2011 at 5:50pm by Terry	3	49	Mar 3^rd, 2011 at 3:44am By: Terry
formalist senryu Mme Holiness barks out her rules - dogma's a pregnant dog Started Feb 28^th, 2011 at 10:17pm by Just_Daniel	2	10	Mar 3^rd, 2011 at 12:05am By: davidf
Yoof No good way To spend ma day No’nuff money No’nuff to do Find meself At end of the queue Started Feb 3^rd, 2011 at 10:51pm by Paul Sands	3	51	Feb 28^th, 2011 at 10:40pm By: Paul Sands
No Valentine Treat When I used to be a gambler I thought I’d played the winning hand, but, though playing with our hearts, I only thought I’d break the bank Started Feb 15^th, 2011 at 9:17pm by Paul Sands	4	36	Feb 28^th, 2011 at 10:36pm By: Just_Daniel
Winter Haiku Excited kids Around the neighborhood Another snow day! ~Davidf Started Feb 27^th, 2011 at 12:43am by davidf	4	22	Feb 28^th, 2011 at 9:29pm By: Just_Daniel
Snowflake Haiku snowflakes are falling one by one, covers the ground like a quilt of white. ~Davidf Started Dec 20^th, 2010 at 12:59am by davidf	6	58	Feb 6^th, 2011 at 1:13am By: flash
HAVE YOU SEEN THE MOUTH ON THAT THING?! HAVE YOU SEEN THE MOUTH ON THAT THING?! The hippopotamus whenever he kisses plants a bus-sized buss on his hippopotamisses. writer Started Apr 9^th, 2009 at 4:05pm by writer	8	84	Feb 3^rd, 2011 at 10:51pm By: Paul Sands
Choices Of money or my girl I'll always choose my honey For all the great things cash can buy You can't get a hug from money ~Davidf Started Feb 28^th, 2010 at 7:56pm by davidf	5	46	Feb 3^rd, 2011 at 10:49pm By: Paul Sands
still frame senryu... forty-seven years... I still see the head-jerk a grassy knoll Started Nov 22^nd, 2010 at 5:36pm by Just_Daniel	4	70	Jan 27^th, 2011 at 4:28pm By: Just_Daniel
Cruelty seed of your success takes hold, comes forth unbidden like a child of rape Started Apr 15^th, 2010 at 7:24pm by Constance	4	14	Jan 25^th, 2011 at 11:52pm By: Paul Sands
Enough Tired of this half life It’s yoke of weary exasperation I want to shout “I am here use me” I will scream” “What’s wrong?” “Do I confuse you?” Started Jan 23^rd, 2011 at 12:23am by Paul Sands	1	21	Jan 23^rd, 2011 at 2:06am By: davidf
Senryu perishing reason food for thought or slow death ... Started Sep 16^th, 2010 at 1:19am by Terry	6	65	Dec 20^th, 2010 at 6:14pm By: Terry
Cinquain Absent of any feeling the body lies lingering with no escape; the mind opens death's portal. Started Sep 17^th, 2010 at 1:25am by Terry	4	79	Dec 19^th, 2010 at 11:31pm By: Terry
Cinquain she looks in the mirror wanting to turn back time she'd give anything to be young again ~Davidf Started Nov 27^th, 2010 at 11:20pm by davidf	3	43	Nov 29^th, 2010 at 4:14pm By: Just_Daniel
Touched (Senryu) I don't often write form poems so not sure how this shapes up. your teasing touch wreathed in soft-kissed words smiles to warm my day Started Aug 17^th, 2009 at 7:42pm by nas « Pages 1 2 »	16	147	Nov 27^th, 2010 at 11:18pm By: davidf
Orange Vibrant, exciting Red-yellow color mixture A tasty fruit too. ~Davidf Started Jun 12^th, 2010 at 11:04pm by davidf	2	41	Jul 12^th, 2010 at 4:28pm By: WildCityWoman
GOLD FUTURES GOLD FUTURES Somewhere at the end of the rainbow leprechauns will bequeath millions but right now it’s getting worrisome underneath. writer Started Apr 6^th, 2009 at 9:09pm by writer	5	21	Jun 12^th, 2010 at 11:01pm By: davidf
Almost Spiritual Recipient of a gardeners soft touch, a garden grows with love... to be seen, to provide, to enjoy; itself, is the tenderest tender. Started Mar 12^th, 2010 at 9:14pm by Terry	4	75	May 18^th, 2010 at 12:44am By: Amrot

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