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The Short Line (SL)
This forum is for posting short form poetry for comment and critique. You may find resource material on these and other forms in the "Poetic Forms" forum. Please post no more than two (2) poems per day and comment on at least two others for each one you post.

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Change Change Shallow water breeds miniature flying vampires with disproportionate heads. They hover, face their human-prey scratching bites that send our nights into malaria sweats;<br ... Started Mar 12^th, 2009 at 10:04am by acricket	3	38	Jun 4^th, 2009 at 12:18am By: davidf
haiku whitecaps crash on shore as the waterfall bounces - i feel our first kiss [this is done as a 5-7-5 chain - feel free if you have a first to add in either American 5-7-5 or for brevity... Started Mar 17^th, 2009 at 7:50pm by acricket	3	34	Mar 27^th, 2009 at 8:17am By: acricket
Life Life Is it short or long Do we follow or lead Can we help our selfs Do we help others What to do Life Started May 16^th, 2008 at 6:54am by April Renee Trout	1	27	Aug 2^nd, 2008 at 8:14pm By: davidf
Why Why Please stop irratating me Your always there In my head I can't run away from myself Why Started May 17^th, 2008 at 6:46pm by April Renee Trout	3	47	Jun 15^th, 2008 at 4:03am By: writer
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Soaring Moment Transcending boundaries of physical life, two souls touch in blithe delight; a gentle converging, magical merging, a transitory ethereal flight. Another old one - ... Started Feb 16^th, 2007 at 1:18am by Brique	2	15	Feb 21^st, 2007 at 10:45pm By: Just_Daniel
FIVE I was away yesterday enjoying a special day with my daughter. However, I took a little time to reflect and write... as promised to Daniel. Five Haiku late march freeze - great-grandmot... Started Feb 14^th, 2007 at 3:25pm by Brique (Ex Member)	6	14	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Brique - Ex Member
haiku (first time) demure buttercups shimmering rays of sunshine lighting my path Monique Started Feb 11^th, 2007 at 11:00pm by Brique (Ex Member)	10	20	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: percephanie - Ex Member
Cruelty seed of your success takes hold, comes forth unbidden like a child of rape Started Apr 15^th, 2010 at 7:24pm by Constance	4	14	Jan 25^th, 2011 at 11:52pm By: Paul Sands
Colors sunlight penetrates billows from a waterfall liquid rainbows dance Started Apr 15^th, 2010 at 7:15pm by Constance	4	50	Apr 22^nd, 2010 at 4:15pm By: Constance
The Daylily with link to video The Daylily When the sun rises, her beauty is revealed, petals outstretched, in a welcome reach. smiling upon the sun, fulfilling her one day of life. embracing the... Started Apr 20^th, 2008 at 4:36pm by Daldoggy « Pages 1 2 »	16	121	May 5^th, 2008 at 10:03pm By: Daldoggy
Poetry I had this brainstorm after reading "what you cant know" by Chaim Personal observations expressing thoughts revealing you Robert Hullender Started Apr 9^th, 2008 at 11:08pm by Daldoggy	8	64	May 4^th, 2008 at 12:54pm By: Just_Daniel
Memorial Day Haiku Soldiers toil Through the grit and grime Respect deserved ~Davidf Started May 25^th, 2015 at 12:47pm by davidf	6	59	May 26^th, 2015 at 2:16am By: davidf
Going Bananas "Banana ice-cream," said the girl to the vendor "Banana?" replied the vendor, "Not chocolate or vanilla? "I don't think so," replied the girl, "It's for my pet gorilla". ~Davidf Started Oct 30^th, 2014 at 9:35pm by davidf	2	37	May 25^th, 2015 at 12:43pm By: davidf
Wild Orchids (Ghazal?) Everyone, I want to send this to a company that takes ghazals and other under-utilized poems...but first I need to know if it is a ghazal or not. I think so, because every other line has the rep... Started Aug 12^th, 2014 at 11:57pm by davidf	2	42	May 25^th, 2015 at 12:40pm By: davidf
Easter As Easter comes nearer and nearer The message should be clearer Jesus came to be our one protection In a holy resurrection Therefore it is meant Easter is truly Heaven sent.<b... Started Apr 2^nd, 2015 at 9:03pm by davidf	5	51	Apr 10^th, 2015 at 5:31pm By: davidf
Humpty's Last Hurrah After Humpty fell from the wall and died They put him in a pan to be fried Then they forgot his stunt on the wall He was only an egg, after all. Started Jun 16^th, 2013 at 10:47am by davidf	3	60	Aug 12^th, 2014 at 11:51pm By: davidf
Snow Show Snow falls gently on the ground not making a single sound It can be soft and pure, wild, or free, creating Wunter's pageantry! ~Davdf P.S. Before y'all say it, I know, beautif... Started Mar 19^th, 2013 at 6:49am by davidf	4	79	Aug 12^th, 2014 at 11:50pm By: davidf
Humpty's Last Hurrah After Humpty fell from the wall and died They put him in a pan to be fried Then they forgot his stunt on the wall He was only an egg, after all. Started Jun 16^th, 2013 at 10:47am by davidf	3	56	Jul 24^th, 2014 at 8:57pm By: Terry
Haiku crickets chirping don't know when to stop insomnia again ~Davidf Started Apr 28^th, 2013 at 10:03pm by davidf	3	36	Jun 16^th, 2013 at 10:43am By: davidf
Senryu caramel corn wedged between Grandpa's dentures ~Davidf Started Oct 23^rd, 2011 at 3:31pm by davidf	5	48	Jun 16^th, 2013 at 10:42am By: davidf
Haiku Sequence the bear tries hard for a taste of golden honey instead, he gets stung ouch! that must really hurt a lot, many may think -- it's un"bear"able ~David Fox Started Mar 10^th, 2012 at 12:56am by davidf	3	53	Apr 28^th, 2013 at 9:58pm By: davidf
Haiku little prints etched in white cat's first snow. ~Davidf Started Dec 3^rd, 2012 at 4:34am by davidf	3	44	Mar 19^th, 2013 at 6:34am By: davidf
Haiku Strawberries and cream Red-haired, fair-skinned girl Hates her nickname. ~Davidf Started Jul 21^st, 2011 at 1:13am by davidf	6	75	Dec 3^rd, 2012 at 4:29am By: davidf
Haiku in the class picture the kid wearing braces gives a silver smile. ~Davidf Started Oct 18^th, 2011 at 2:02am by davidf	4	53	Oct 24^th, 2011 at 1:32pm By: Just_Daniel

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