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The Short Line (SL)
This forum is for posting short form poetry for comment and critique. You may find resource material on these and other forms in the "Poetic Forms" forum. Please post no more than two (2) poems per day and comment on at least two others for each one you post.

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formalist senryu Mme Holiness barks out her rules - dogma's a pregnant dog Started Feb 28^th, 2011 at 10:17pm by Just_Daniel	2	10	Mar 3^rd, 2011 at 12:05am By: davidf
50-billion air (faux-ku) 50-billion air Bernard made off with peter'd portfolios toupée apaul'd _{© MLee Dickens’son 17 Dec 2008} Started Dec 17^th, 2008 at 6:32pm by Just_Daniel	3	37	Jan 6^th, 2009 at 4:55am By: Merrimuse
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A Broken Family The wall had crumbled The light flickering in pain Homeless angels cry Started Aug 9^th, 2009 at 3:01am by Jan	4	21	Aug 17^th, 2009 at 8:22pm By: Just_Daniel
a dickens of a cinquain... detail of two setees: once loud in the Bastille can now not see so far a head to speak _{© MLee Dickens'son 29 April 2008} Started Apr 29^th, 2008 at 3:39pm by Just_Daniel	2	24	May 2^nd, 2008 at 8:17pm By: Lucy
a familiar refrayin' [huitain] ^{a familiar refrayin'} I'm losing myself in writing again though my scribbling so far is but drivel. It's easier now with somewhat less pain while I'm trying to make my fat shrivel.<... Started Apr 11^th, 2012 at 4:21pm by Just_Daniel	2	39	May 10^th, 2012 at 1:00am By: Terry
A Little Sunshine Keep a little sunshine in your life and don't forget to pray give the Lord your utmost thanks that He gave you today. ~Davidf Started Jul 6^th, 2009 at 12:56am by davidf	8	62	Aug 9^th, 2009 at 3:19am By: davidf
A Perfect World Lord, grant me a perfect world Where the sun will always shine I'm sure that you can do it, Lord If you can turn water into wine. ~Davidf Started Sep 25^th, 2011 at 2:08pm by davidf	4	22	Oct 4^th, 2011 at 1:56am By: davidf
a rose a rose velvet petals each one softly floating in a slightly warm summer breeze; they dance with untouchable melody... what silent beauty when I watched their dance..... another attempt at rictameter slightly revised, see daniel's suggestions... Started Feb 12^th, 2007 at 2:52pm by percephanie (Ex Member)	6	47	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: percephanie - Ex Member
A Silly Poem Bees buzz around Butterflies flutter If honeybees make honey Do butterflies make butter? ~Davidf Started Feb 28^th, 2009 at 4:28am by davidf	5	62	Jun 3^rd, 2009 at 1:46am By: davidf
A tick stuck tween teeth 1. (REVISION 05/15/07) Trees thick as boulders wrap around my hiding place. Rapids interject. _________________________________________ (Original) Trees thick as boulders wrap around my hiding... Started Apr 28^th, 2007 at 5:45am by dwgpoet (Ex Member)	2	11	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: dwgpoet - Ex Member
A Touch A Touch Look closely while you have the will, lay eyes on me as I am still, stare long, when I am there so deep, clothed in dreams and sound asleep. No man may keep me i... Started Oct 3^rd, 2008 at 9:03pm by Lin	10	33	Oct 8^th, 2008 at 3:07am By: Lin
A WRITER WRITES I seem to have writing on the front burner lately. A WRITER WRITES A writer writes and hopes that somewhere, sometime, a reader reads. For only with those other eyes, c... Started Jan 18^th, 2009 at 7:51am by writer	4	51	Jan 19^th, 2009 at 8:48pm By: writer
ABC Poem (Procrastination) Life mortal life never stopping for a moment on its relentless move forward punishes those who procrastinate. Started Oct 18^th, 2011 at 3:48pm by sunilmathur	9	43	Mar 25^th, 2012 at 11:59am By: WildCityWoman
AFC senryu... Brady Bunch beaches San Diego Phoenix flight _{© MLee Dickens'son 20 Jan 2008} Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 8:57pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	3	29	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Terry - Ex Member
Affair forbidden passion impossible gain hidden secrets inevitable pain The syllables aren't the same and secrets are hidden so ??? Started Feb 11^th, 2007 at 3:15pm by percephanie (Ex Member) « Pages 1 2 »	22	113	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Just_Daniel - Ex Member
Alcor - Mizar -- A Rictameter Alcor - Mizar My love, When you’d left me, I'd always reach and grab a slice of moon and hold it close. For all those years, I’d roll the stars like dice, and p... Started Mar 9^th, 2007 at 4:04am by Normpo	5	53	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Just_Daniel - Ex Member
All-American 'ku it isn't the same storeboght brands just don't compare to Mom's apple pie ~Davidf (I'm sure this could be shortened -- but I'll leave that you'all). Started Apr 19^th, 2009 at 2:37am by davidf	1	22	Apr 19^th, 2009 at 3:38pm By: writer
Almost Spiritual Recipient of a gardeners soft touch, a garden grows with love... to be seen, to provide, to enjoy; itself, is the tenderest tender. Started Mar 12^th, 2010 at 9:14pm by Terry	4	75	May 18^th, 2010 at 12:44am By: Amrot
AMERICA...Still Free AMERICA...Still Free The essence of her aroma...causes me to breathe in uncontrolled gasps reaching out to her so.. she will know that i am part of her spewed from her womb as a... Started Feb 8^th, 2009 at 2:40pm by Wordmaster77	2	31	Mar 28^th, 2009 at 11:30pm By: davidf
An Acrostic for David Moved this one to SONNETS thread ... Started Mar 25^th, 2012 at 12:05pm by WildCityWoman	5	49	Apr 11^th, 2012 at 1:05pm By: Just_Daniel
an autumn haiku A cool autumn breeze brings a tingle to my skin -- thank you for the kiss Started Sep 23^rd, 2009 at 3:16am by randy	11	41	Sep 25^th, 2009 at 7:25pm By: randy
Another Cinquain - Moving Forward? I found this amongst my archives and thought to share. This was before I married again as my last name is now Reinhart. Was feeling philosophical one night and penned the following: ... Thanks for reading, Dolly Started Dec 4^th, 2008 at 8:37am by Merrimuse	3	24	Dec 15^th, 2008 at 2:39pm By: Just_Daniel
Another Tetractys - Daniel says FOM - Yea! The Original Thoughts like rain keep coming if you want them or whether you don't ... can't stop rain, either. ( I live in the rainy, rainy Willamete Valley of Oregon, USA) Thanks for stopping by... Started Dec 4^th, 2008 at 8:46am by Merrimuse	5	17	Dec 15^th, 2008 at 2:41pm By: Just_Daniel
At the dock I tried fishing for a poem But the muse just wasn't biting It's all right, I'll just tell the tale Of the epic that got away. ~Davidf Started Dec 17^th, 2009 at 4:52am by davidf	3	34	Apr 15^th, 2010 at 6:51pm By: Constance

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