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Tahoma iris  [ tanka ]
Tahoma iris
a robin brushes
past a clump of daffodils
sunshine through drizzle
look up... a bow is looming
over Mt. Rainier's white crest
© MLee Dickens'son 08 April 2008

Started Apr 8th, 2008 at 3:18pm by Just_Daniel
6 65 Last Post Apr 9th, 2008 at 12:23pm
By: Just_Daniel
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gravity   (cinquain)  [ REVISED 3/09/09 ]
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gravity 
Six feet
now overhead
you lie there in wonder
as if the world came closing in
on you.
Original
Quote:
you're six
feet underground
wondering what happened
like the world has come closing in
on you

Started Dec 19th, 2008 at 9:39pm by Just_Daniel
10 31 Last Post Mar 9th, 2009 at 7:08pm
By: Just_Daniel
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Word Vamp
revision:
I wait  
here patiently  
to greet him with my eyes.  
He bites my lip and drinks my words-  
then daubs poetic trickles from his mouth,  
but words still re...

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Started Feb 26th, 2007 at 5:32pm by percephanie
10 17 Last Post Mar 3rd, 2007 at 12:08am
By: percephanie
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Sunshine & Rainbows
When you have sunshine
Who needs the rain?
Instead I'm sending you rainbows
So you can smile again.
~Davidf
P.S. If anyone can think of a better title for this, I'm all ears.

Started Jul 27th, 2008 at 12:47pm by davidf
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