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The Short Line (SL)
This forum is for posting short form poetry for comment and critique. You may find resource material on these and other forms in the "Poetic Forms" forum. Please post no more than two (2) poems per day and comment on at least two others for each one you post. (Moderator: Normpo)
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Tahoma iris [ tanka ]
Tahoma iris
a robin brushes past a clump of daffodils sunshine through drizzle look up... a bow is looming over Mt. Rainier's white crest © MLee Dickens'son 08 April 2008 Started Apr 8th, 2008 at 3:18pm by Just_Daniel |
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Apr 9th, 2008 at 12:23pm By: Just_Daniel |
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gravity (cinquain) [ REVISED 3/09/09 ]
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gravity Six feet now overhead you lie there in wonder as if the world came closing in on you. Original Quote: you're six feet underground wondering what happened like the world has come closing in on you Started Dec 19th, 2008 at 9:39pm by Just_Daniel |
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Mar 9th, 2009 at 7:08pm By: Just_Daniel |
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Word Vamp
revision:
I wait here patiently to greet him with my eyes. He bites my lip and drinks my words- then daubs poetic trickles from his mouth, but words still re... ------------------------------------------------ Started Feb 26th, 2007 at 5:32pm by percephanie |
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Mar 3rd, 2007 at 12:08am By: percephanie |
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Sunshine & Rainbows
When you have sunshine
Who needs the rain? Instead I'm sending you rainbows So you can smile again. ~Davidf P.S. If anyone can think of a better title for this, I'm all ears. Started Jul 27th, 2008 at 12:47pm by davidf |
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Sep 24th, 2008 at 12:12am By: davidf |
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