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The Short Line (SL)
This forum is for posting short form poetry for comment and critique. You may find resource material on these and other forms in the "Poetic Forms" forum. Please post no more than two (2) poems per day and comment on at least two others for each one you post.

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Sunshine & Rainbows When you have sunshine Who needs the rain? Instead I'm sending you rainbows So you can smile again. ~Davidf P.S. If anyone can think of a better title for this, I'm all ears. Started Jul 27^th, 2008 at 12:47pm by davidf	4	51	Sep 24^th, 2008 at 12:12am By: davidf
Word Vamp revision: I wait here patiently to greet him with my eyes. He bites my lip and drinks my words- then daubs poetic trickles from his mouth, but words still re... ------------------------------------------------ Started Feb 26^th, 2007 at 5:32pm by percephanie	10	17	Mar 3^rd, 2007 at 12:08am By: percephanie
gravity (cinquain) [ REVISED 3/09/09 ] ^{Revision #1} gravity Six feet now overhead you lie there in wonder as if the world came closing in on you. _Original Quote: you're six feet underground wondering what happened like the world has come closing in on you Started Dec 19^th, 2008 at 9:39pm by Just_Daniel	10	31	Mar 9^th, 2009 at 7:08pm By: Just_Daniel
Tahoma iris [ tanka ] Tahoma iris a robin brushes past a clump of daffodils sunshine through drizzle look up... a bow is looming over Mt. Rainier's white crest _{© MLee Dickens'son 08 April 2008} Started Apr 8^th, 2008 at 3:18pm by Just_Daniel	6	65	Apr 9^th, 2008 at 12:23pm By: Just_Daniel
REVERSAL Okay...I have no idea where this came from or why it left wherever it was and showed up at my door. I had the last three lines in my "idea" file for a month or so. Today, while seeking something to... Started Jul 8^th, 2009 at 7:36pm by writer	5	69	Dec 17^th, 2009 at 4:49am By: davidf
goest wrider... faux-ku goest wrider mo' then empty lot fo' thy public service; dost buggy Started May 26^th, 2007 at 3:23pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	4	7	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Just_Daniel - Ex Member
ongoing postal ~ faux-ku ongoing postal think outside the box; be sure order's packed inside before you stamp _{© MLee Dickens'son 04 Oct 2007} Started Oct 15^th, 2007 at 3:56pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	5	12	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Just_Daniel - Ex Member
butts... cleaning up butts left no smoking gun... my V-8 Started Dec 7^th, 2007 at 11:53am by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	6	39	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Just_Daniel - Ex Member
Germinating Beginnings Winter rains shower Watering us on this New day Encouraging growth ~Rene~ Schwiesow Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 4:33pm by duetsdove (Ex Member)	10	59	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: duetsdove - Ex Member
cancer of Camel lot ~ faux-quain cancer of Camels lot can Sir _fill in the blank_, when Arthur's smoke is cleared, un-stick that death blow by any more dread ? _{MLee Dickens'son 04 Jan 2008} Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 7:47pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	7	7	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Normpo
senryru ~ subconscious rules there aren't any subconscious rules it does Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 8:34pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	1	14	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: duetsdove - Ex Member
fukyo fukyo wizened fingers follow deLight son of a Basho © MLee Dickens'son 16 Jan 2007 Please note the link. Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 8:35pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	5	12	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: duetsdove - Ex Member
Blank Verse blank verse look down on MLee writin' a thousandth poem sensein'isfingers trippin' over clacketty keys unmindful o' the moment _{© MLee Dickens'son 17 Jan 2008} Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 8:45pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	8	11	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: nas - Ex Member
Cinquain Trading integrity, for beads and baubles to aquire gain, only reaps lost Karma. terry (REV 1) Trading integrity, becoming Acquirer, corrupts life, rea... Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 8:53pm by Terry (Ex Member)	5	76	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Terry - Ex Member
rotation darkened sky hiding whitened birch upon earth's soil yields life with sun's rays terry Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 8:54pm by Terry (Ex Member)	10	5	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Just_Daniel - Ex Member
Haiku around 5 a.m. beautiful sunset paints the winter sky ~Davidf Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 8:55pm by davidf (Ex Member)	6	14	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Just_Daniel - Ex Member
AFC senryu... Brady Bunch beaches San Diego Phoenix flight _{© MLee Dickens'son 20 Jan 2008} Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 8:57pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	3	29	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Terry - Ex Member
Haiku kites fly children laugh grandparents reflecting warm wind fades days end. terry Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 8:57pm by Terry (Ex Member)	4	13	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Terry - Ex Member
downright senryu... Abraham reached up willing to offer his son God did _{MLee Dickens'son 27 Jan 2007 from Genesis 22} Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 9:10pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	2	7	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Just_Daniel - Ex Member
lanturne ~ ( lips ) lips provide impression no need to talk back © MLee Dickens’son 10 Feb 2007 Started Feb 10^th, 2007 at 9:50pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	2	8	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Normpo
haiku ( splash on icy pond ) splash on icy pond splinters placid sunrise; cat licks icily Started Feb 11^th, 2007 at 8:26pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	8	65	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: percephanie - Ex Member
haiku (first time) demure buttercups shimmering rays of sunshine lighting my path Monique Started Feb 11^th, 2007 at 11:00pm by Brique (Ex Member)	10	20	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: percephanie - Ex Member
FIVE I was away yesterday enjoying a special day with my daughter. However, I took a little time to reflect and write... as promised to Daniel. Five Haiku late march freeze - great-grandmot... Started Feb 14^th, 2007 at 3:25pm by Brique (Ex Member)	6	14	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Brique - Ex Member
First Haikus toes curled clutching sand warm wind swirling, life passes old man's soul skyward naked branch snow melts seeing unseen bud, life grows bared slopes bare anew eyes transf... Started Feb 15^th, 2007 at 3:56am by Terry (Ex Member)	5	5	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Terry - Ex Member
The cave Help me to find my way; alone in this dark place where noises seem to shadow me preventing me from sleeping; it's a maze. I look at nothing, but I smell the stench of ... Started Feb 15^th, 2007 at 6:02pm by percephanie (Ex Member)	6	52	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: percephanie - Ex Member

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