PoemTrain - The Short Line (SL)

(UTC)

Change Template:

Choose Language:

PoemTrain › Writer's Depot › The Short Line (SL)

The Short Line (SL)
This forum is for posting short form poetry for comment and critique. You may find resource material on these and other forms in the "Poetic Forms" forum. Please post no more than two (2) poems per day and comment on at least two others for each one you post.

(Moderator: Normpo)

Topics: 279
Posts: 1794

Pages: 1 [2] 3 4 ... 12

Subject / Started By	Replies	Views	Last Post
a familiar refrayin' [huitain] ^{a familiar refrayin'} I'm losing myself in writing again though my scribbling so far is but drivel. It's easier now with somewhat less pain while I'm trying to make my fat shrivel.<... Started Apr 11^th, 2012 at 4:21pm by Just_Daniel	2	39	May 10^th, 2012 at 1:00am By: Terry
re-membered [tanka] ^re-membered remember: days when you ran with the wind they have passed away like your knees _{© MLee Dickens'son 2012} Started Apr 11^th, 2012 at 12:54pm by Just_Daniel	3	24	May 7^th, 2012 at 7:02pm By: Terry
An Acrostic for David Moved this one to SONNETS thread ... Started Mar 25^th, 2012 at 12:05pm by WildCityWoman	5	49	Apr 11^th, 2012 at 1:05pm By: Just_Daniel
ABC Poem (Procrastination) Life mortal life never stopping for a moment on its relentless move forward punishes those who procrastinate. Started Oct 18^th, 2011 at 3:48pm by sunilmathur	9	43	Mar 25^th, 2012 at 11:59am By: WildCityWoman
Sonnet Tetrameter - Star Crossed Form - "Combing Through" Star-Crossed Form - Combing Through Nights's moonglow accents salt-blond hair and bonds with gentle hands which flow bewitched while combing through, beyond the hue of golden stran... Started Mar 3^rd, 2012 at 4:36pm by Normpo	4	48	Mar 25^th, 2012 at 11:57am By: WildCityWoman
Sea Ya! Today I needed the sea but the sea didn't need me. So it ran away... to sea Started Jun 2^nd, 2011 at 9:57pm by Paul Sands	5	70	Mar 25^th, 2012 at 11:50am By: WildCityWoman
Re: Haku Lovely image but I would try to avoid the repetition of trees and find another word for exist. Maybe something like Autumn leaves lots of wonderous colours fall from the trees/rust... Started Nov 14^th, 2011 at 12:43am by nas	2	71	Nov 18^th, 2011 at 7:20pm By: davidf
Haiku full moon’s yellow face adorns the darkness at dusk: trees stand out dimly Started Nov 3^rd, 2011 at 11:16am by sunilmathur	4	49	Nov 17^th, 2011 at 9:42pm By: davidf
Haiku budding blooms in spring rise from melted snow... a perfect picture Terry Started Oct 20^th, 2011 at 2:47am by Terry	6	84	Oct 24^th, 2011 at 4:46pm By: Terry
Haiku in the class picture the kid wearing braces gives a silver smile. ~Davidf Started Oct 18^th, 2011 at 2:02am by davidf	4	53	Oct 24^th, 2011 at 1:32pm By: Just_Daniel
Haiku shimmering sea waves embrace the dimly lit coast: crescent moon watches Started Oct 5^th, 2011 at 2:17am by sunilmathur	7	68	Oct 23^rd, 2011 at 3:28pm By: davidf
Bumper Sticker Politics - a Tanka social media anti social media spin and deception... Children and Kings demanding demands be met, not Presidents Terry Would like to try and work this as a Renga if anyon... Started Oct 9^th, 2011 at 8:11pm by Terry	3	49	Oct 18^th, 2011 at 2:01am By: davidf
Delight Tuesday's last embers wash the sky vermillion shepherds sleep happy [IMAGE] Original Tuesdays last embers A sky washed vermillion Leaves shepherds happy Started Jul 9^th, 2011 at 4:39pm by Paul Sands	6	53	Oct 18^th, 2011 at 1:58am By: davidf
Fossils (Haiku) A-ged encryption Secrets from Earth’s youthful flush open God’s sandbox Started Jan 26^th, 2011 at 12:07am by Paul Sands	4	63	Oct 17^th, 2011 at 11:07am By: sunilmathur
Change - a Tanka when truth is filtered transparency is veiled, arrogrgance prevails the master becomes humble tumbling from the mountain top Nas, Revised per your suggestion, then some.<... Started Oct 13^th, 2011 at 11:05pm by Terry	3	81	Oct 17^th, 2011 at 11:02am By: sunilmathur
Haiku my rainbow garden flowers of different colors nestled in green grass ~Davidf Started Sep 17^th, 2011 at 8:23pm by davidf	3	38	Oct 9^th, 2011 at 7:27pm By: Terry
spring-ku taut guitar strings -- untaught fingers long for spring Started Aug 16^th, 2011 at 3:33pm by Just_Daniel	4	37	Oct 9^th, 2011 at 6:51pm By: Terry
late fate _{late fate} no Osama bin laden with his body – sea fête Sealed Started May 4^th, 2011 at 12:39pm by Just_Daniel	8	79	Oct 8^th, 2011 at 2:09am By: sunilmathur
A Perfect World Lord, grant me a perfect world Where the sun will always shine I'm sure that you can do it, Lord If you can turn water into wine. ~Davidf Started Sep 25^th, 2011 at 2:08pm by davidf	4	22	Oct 4^th, 2011 at 1:56am By: davidf
Haiku(ish) [IMAGE] oily darts return summer's clarion herald vanguard in the blue Started May 10^th, 2011 at 10:08am by Paul Sands	4	30	Sep 29^th, 2011 at 5:48pm By: Just_Daniel
Senryu - Live Civility Rev 1 Precipitously on the edge of indifference; reason perishes ... Started Sep 16^th, 2010 at 4:35pm by Terry	4	60	Sep 25^th, 2011 at 1:59pm By: davidf
Il Pleut [IMAGE] Started Jul 20^th, 2011 at 9:46pm by Paul Sands	4	42	Sep 17^th, 2011 at 8:22pm By: davidf
Senryu Approrpriate The woman gave birth on Labor Day ~Davidf Started Sep 3^rd, 2011 at 6:36pm by davidf	4	59	Sep 9^th, 2011 at 3:36am By: Just_Daniel
telling-ru Hokum Tell died without an heir; William shot straighter Started Aug 23^rd, 2011 at 12:22pm by Just_Daniel	3	28	Sep 3^rd, 2011 at 6:13pm By: davidf
Slacker If you only need to begin Why bother remembering when; You were far to slow So Ya never could go And always to late to begin. Started Feb 26^th, 2011 at 1:29am by Terry	5	27	Jul 22^nd, 2011 at 12:55am By: Terry

Pages: 1 [2] 3 4 ... 12

Thread Icons and User Permissions

‹ Board Index Top