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The Short Line (SL)
This forum is for posting short form poetry for comment and critique. You may find resource material on these and other forms in the "Poetic Forms" forum. Please post no more than two (2) poems per day and comment on at least two others for each one you post.

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the eyes have it... (senryu) the waiter's lovely eyes watch every movement lobster claws Started Dec 4^th, 2008 at 3:31am by Just_Daniel	0	15	Dec 4^th, 2008 at 3:31am By: Just_Daniel
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quatrain walk light-footed atop the snow bright blue eyes see far in the sky carry sharp arrows with my bow for I am Legolas, tis I Started Feb 13^th, 2007 at 5:23pm by percephanie	0	30	Feb 13^th, 2007 at 7:23pm By: percephanie
Seeking lands traveled eyes opened understanding all no terry Started Mar 25^th, 2008 at 1:22am by Terry (Ex Member)	0	5	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Terry - Ex Member
disgruntled haiku ? quaker oats lead the way through; rumblings _{© MLee Dickens'son 14 Mar 2008} Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 10:03pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	0	5	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Just_Daniel - Ex Member
Living Rural Fog rises above the morning dew, over lush green valleys, placid lakes and beyond rushing mountain streams, the air crisp and welcoming, it is beautiful and I am blessed... q... Started Oct 6^th, 2015 at 4:49am by Terry	1	123	Oct 18^th, 2015 at 1:47pm By: nas
Timely Cinquain in vain Lazarus tried to figure out the date when Jesus raised him... then he heard March forth! March fourth? I guess that means there were at least three more behind that rock inside... Started Mar 4^th, 2011 at 2:28pm by Just_Daniel	1	31	Mar 5^th, 2011 at 11:12pm By: davidf
Enough Tired of this half life It’s yoke of weary exasperation I want to shout “I am here use me” I will scream” “What’s wrong?” “Do I confuse you?” Started Jan 23^rd, 2011 at 12:23am by Paul Sands	1	21	Jan 23^rd, 2011 at 2:06am By: davidf
All-American 'ku it isn't the same storeboght brands just don't compare to Mom's apple pie ~Davidf (I'm sure this could be shortened -- but I'll leave that you'all). Started Apr 19^th, 2009 at 2:37am by davidf	1	22	Apr 19^th, 2009 at 3:38pm By: writer
Haiku A chorus of birds Sing together merrily One a lone tree branch ~Davidf Started Mar 28^th, 2009 at 11:32pm by davidf	1	20	Mar 29^th, 2009 at 2:47am By: Just_Daniel
Haiku - Lin 10/14/08 Mars flickers above moody Red blinks his response to Venus' hot wink Lin Cava Started Oct 15^th, 2008 at 6:15am by Lin	1	25	Oct 16^th, 2008 at 4:29pm By: Just_Daniel
Haiku Little boy goes to bed Thinking of delicious things Has sweet dreams. ~Davidf Started Sep 26^th, 2008 at 1:01am by davidf	1	16	Sep 29^th, 2008 at 2:33pm By: Just_Daniel
Life Life Is it short or long Do we follow or lead Can we help our selfs Do we help others What to do Life Started May 16^th, 2008 at 6:54am by April Renee Trout	1	27	Aug 2^nd, 2008 at 8:14pm By: davidf
Haiku As the sun rises A new day is beginning Wake up, seize the day. ~Davidf Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 9:51pm by davidf	1	8	Mar 2^nd, 2008 at 1:29pm By: duetsdove
Doggone Days (I realize this haiku is out of season and is not a "traditional"haiku, so bear with me): mutt in the sun on a summer day cook-out one hot dog. _{(Daniel I remembered your advice ...} ~Davidf Started Nov 22^nd, 2007 at 5:10am by davidf	1	9	Nov 22^nd, 2007 at 6:07pm By: Just_Daniel
senryru ~ subconscious rules there aren't any subconscious rules it does Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 8:34pm by Just_Daniel (Ex Member)	1	14	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: duetsdove - Ex Member
Going Bananas "Banana ice-cream," said the girl to the vendor "Banana?" replied the vendor, "Not chocolate or vanilla? "I don't think so," replied the girl, "It's for my pet gorilla". ~Davidf Started Oct 30^th, 2014 at 9:35pm by davidf	2	36	May 25^th, 2015 at 12:43pm By: davidf
Wild Orchids (Ghazal?) Everyone, I want to send this to a company that takes ghazals and other under-utilized poems...but first I need to know if it is a ghazal or not. I think so, because every other line has the rep... Started Aug 12^th, 2014 at 11:57pm by davidf	2	41	May 25^th, 2015 at 12:40pm By: davidf
Shardoma Allowing happiness to be defined by another is a path to loneliness; need only look within. Started Oct 30^th, 2014 at 6:44pm by Terry	2	49	Nov 2^nd, 2014 at 5:57am By: Terry
Remembering the Journey Friendships nurtured and enjoyed are like tall tales, ever changing ... Never forgotten. Terry Started Jul 3^rd, 2014 at 7:09am by Terry	2	65	Jul 10^th, 2014 at 5:20am By: Terry
RECOGNITION Her dreams un-veiled her hopes are high, her prayers fervent for child and family...her most ardent wish is happiness for all, her heart is kind, her home, a Story Book built on Love for all who ... Started May 10^th, 2012 at 7:29pm by Terry	2	67	Jul 3^rd, 2012 at 1:25pm By: davidf
a familiar refrayin' [huitain] ^{a familiar refrayin'} I'm losing myself in writing again though my scribbling so far is but drivel. It's easier now with somewhat less pain while I'm trying to make my fat shrivel.<... Started Apr 11^th, 2012 at 4:21pm by Just_Daniel	2	39	May 10^th, 2012 at 1:00am By: Terry
Re: Haku Lovely image but I would try to avoid the repetition of trees and find another word for exist. Maybe something like Autumn leaves lots of wonderous colours fall from the trees/rust... Started Nov 14^th, 2011 at 12:43am by nas	2	71	Nov 18^th, 2011 at 7:20pm By: davidf
Religious Haiku sometimes God touches your soul hugs from heaven ~Davidf Started Mar 3^rd, 2011 at 12:02am by davidf	2	22	Mar 4^th, 2011 at 1:46am By: Terry
briefly speaking... Concise is writing in your briefs to show off everything in much the way a bas-relief's an image with a zing. Started Feb 28^th, 2011 at 10:13pm by Just_Daniel	2	31	Mar 3^rd, 2011 at 3:47am By: Terry

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