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Re: Haiku
Reply #6 - Dec 3rd, 2012 at 4:29am
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Dunno, WidCityWoman, your guess is good as mine...thanks for commenting.
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Re: Haiku
Reply #5 - Mar 25th, 2012 at 11:52am
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Daniel's the best guy to go to - he knows his way around the 'formed' poetry.

If you can get a formed poem by Daniel, you've done your work.

(where is daniel, anyway?)
  
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Reply #4 - Mar 15th, 2012 at 4:50pm
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Terry,
You're right of course.  Daniel has explained the difference to me several times, but I guess old habits die hard... Wink
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Re: Haiku
Reply #3 - Mar 14th, 2012 at 7:03pm
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David,

This is imaginative and cute, but belongs more to Senyru than Haiku, it
contains human foibles and humor, which is the intent of Senyru, no expert here.  Look Poetic forms for explanation, much better than I can
do.

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Re: Haiku
Reply #2 - Mar 10th, 2012 at 12:42am
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Thank you for your comment, nas.  This poem is purely fictional, but I would feel sorry for her, if it was true.
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Re: Haiku
Reply #1 - Jul 21st, 2011 at 7:03am
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Poor girl

and those giving her the nickname have so little imagination.
  
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Jul 21st, 2011 at 1:13am
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Strawberries and cream
Red-haired, fair-skinned girl
Hates her nickname.

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