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Re: Senryu
Reply #3 - Aug 7th, 2014 at 10:42pm
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Terry,
Sad, but then again, every poem does not have to be happy.  Nice job.
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Reply #2 - Aug 4th, 2014 at 5:41am
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Nas,

Appreciate that.

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Reply #1 - Aug 4th, 2014 at 5:06am
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Good senryu, very vivid.
  
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Aug 2nd, 2014 at 8:56pm
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beneath the arbor
fallen grapes lay rotting;
shaken...drunkard dies

  
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