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Firebox (FB)
This is a CRITIQUE forum...Stoking and smoking poetry critiques. This is not a forum for the faint-hearted. It is strongly advised that you first post a poem in the On Track forum to get input prior to posting it here.Posting Rules: You may post 1 piece each day but you must post one thoughtful and substantial reply to at least one other writer here before posting your own poem.

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** time will tell Mourners, sink down on knees, assemble, stiff as knives, plunged into newly dug earth, Despair like a shawl hovering around them. Tears running down cheeks, <b... Started Jan 11^th, 2010 at 1:01pm by peach	5	126	May 15^th, 2011 at 1:30am By: peach
Earning the Rank of Dad The story ends—though now he knows it really has just started. The truth has fin'ly been exposed. All lies have been discarded. And though a casualty he's not, can't help but feel retarded.... Started Feb 22^nd, 2006 at 4:53pm by Shawn_M._Roeder	5	55	Mar 31^st, 2006 at 10:50pm By: Shawn_M._Roeder
What's Broken? This was offered in class to the prompt of the title "What's Broken"...no other requirements to the assignment. What's Broken? The ribs all down his right side ache just like a four-hole pun... Started Mar 2^nd, 2010 at 1:22pm by dericlee	13	123	Mar 20^th, 2010 at 2:18am By: Tim
Call Upon the Wind (please help with punctuation) [font=Verdana][color=Purple][i] I whisper to the trees to pass my word to the wind. Carry this message to my love on your currents high aloft. My cries to the night sky;<br... Started Sep 16^th, 2007 at 4:51am by Zaac	12	170	Apr 10^th, 2008 at 12:17am By: KerrinScott
** love sick Cold words carry the sting of frostbite, a most intimate threat to tender flesh. Exposed to such mean treatment its healthy glow dims to shadow. Conflicted, love, turns chill<br /... Started Dec 30^th, 2009 at 7:27pm by peach	8	206	Jan 3^rd, 2010 at 6:36pm By: nas
Fascinatingly Different (Revised) 3rd Revision Abled differently, this child is a wonder, a source of delight to those who recognize her as unique. She holds the happiness others seek in vain,... Started Oct 20^th, 2006 at 11:32am by sunilmathur	12	134	Dec 5^th, 2006 at 6:45am By: sunilmathur

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