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Tinkerbell Full Member Offline Give thy thoughts no tongue - Shakespeare Posts: 190 Location: Southbroom, KZN, South Africa Joined: Feb 28^th, 2007	Re: A Creation Story - Our Uni-verse Reply #9 - Nov 11^th, 2023 at 12:13pm	Print Post
	Shew, such a long time since I have been here. Lots of water under the bridge... How are you all? I had a refresher on your wonderful poem. I am now an visual artist... a late career change! I also write a lot explaining my paintings. Have a wonderful weekend! Tinkerbell
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Normpo Forum Administrator Offline Posts: 10830 Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	Re: A Creation Story - Our Uni-verse Reply #8 - Nov 14^th, 2009 at 12:52am	Print Post
	Rene, I can write like this when I have some wine and water. ~smile~ Norm


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Normpo Forum Administrator Offline Posts: 10830 Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	Re: A Creation Story - Our Uni-verse Reply #7 - Nov 14^th, 2009 at 12:51am	Print Post
	Ron -- thanks for dropping in on this --- Norm


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duetsdove Supreme Member Offline Posts: 9328 Location: Somewhere near a pebble Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	Re: A Creation Story - Our Uni-verse Reply #6 - Nov 10^th, 2009 at 5:11pm	Print Post
	Funny. . .I think I just heard this read. . .aloud. . .somewhere. : ) I haven't been to the terminal yet. . .heading there now. . .but for those of you who do not know. . .Norm made a special appearance at The Art of Words poetry venue in Plymouth, MA that I host. . . and read at open mic. Was glad to have him there! Anam Cara as he knows. . .is one of my very favourite concepts. Rene


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jgdittier Gold Star Member Offline I love YaBB 1G - SP1! Posts: 759 Location: Watertown, Ct. Joined: Dec 27^th, 2006	Re: A Creation Story - Our Uni-verse Reply #5 - Nov 10^th, 2009 at 3:17pm	Print Post
	Dear Norm, My learning for the day, Anam Cara. A magnificant concept as is the poetry containing it. Cheers, Ron jgdittier


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Tinkerbell Full Member Offline Give thy thoughts no tongue - Shakespeare Posts: 190 Location: Southbroom, KZN, South Africa Joined: Feb 28^th, 2007	Re: A Creation Story - Our Uni-verse Reply #4 - Nov 10^th, 2009 at 12:03pm	Print Post
	Hi Norm I noticed, and enjoyed, but, the poem is written well and it parts the importance of the journey! With appreciation! Bev


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Normpo Forum Administrator Offline Posts: 10830 Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	Re: A Creation Story - Our Uni-verse Reply #3 - Nov 10^th, 2009 at 11:57am	Print Post
	Tink: "Life is a journey, not a destination." - Ralph Waldo Emerson This little boat trip was an important part of my journy. Thanks for noticing ... Norm


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Tinkerbell Full Member Offline Give thy thoughts no tongue - Shakespeare Posts: 190 Location: Southbroom, KZN, South Africa Joined: Feb 28^th, 2007	Re: A Creation Story - Our Uni-verse Reply #2 - Nov 10^th, 2009 at 11:48am	Print Post
	Hello Norm~ I was fascinated by this...not sure I understand all of it but, there is such a warmth and a tenderness in the words. The words take us on a short trip to perform a ritual - 'over a long period of time...' Thank you for sharing it! Tink!


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Normpo Forum Administrator Offline Posts: 10830 Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	Re: A Creation Story - Our Uni-verse Reply #1 - Nov 9^th, 2009 at 11:12pm	Print Post
	nas, glad you enjoyed the re-read--- - I've been re-writing bits and pieces of it and maybe about a year from now I'll have it where I am 100% with it. ~smile~ Norm


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nas Topic Starter Supreme Member Offline I love YaBB 1G - SP1! Posts: 9444 Joined: Sep 11^th, 2006	Re: A Creation Story - Our Uni-verse Nov 9^th, 2009 at 6:50pm	Print Post
	Really like this Norm but I remember reading it or at least part of it before. Still, very much enjoyed re-reading and feeling again the spiritual closeness, no words needed of the time the two of spent aboard that boat.


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