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This forum is for COMMENT ONLY. When posting a poem here, please do NOT request critique; when responding or offering a comment, please DO NOT ever offer critique. Post your poems in On Track or Firebox ONLY for critique. You may, if you wish, post a poem concurrently in Main Line and On Track as long as you adhere to the posting rules in each forum Posting Rules:You may post 1 piece each day but you must FIRST respond to at least 2 other poems in this forum before posting again.

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Into Focus Into Focus Now as I walk from this star that casts no shrinking shadow on its galactic neighbors, mysteries come into focus through cloudless skies. Moons, dull unto... Started Aug 22^nd, 2008 at 12:05pm by Normpo	3	37	Sep 1^st, 2008 at 8:29am By: eric_never
better rich married life clear better rich married life clear feet hour near waking pity... for you Don't pity him, that married man; he's really very rich. He's better off with Kelly Ann, who you thought was a... Started Aug 23^rd, 2009 at 1:04pm by Just_Daniel	3	42	Sep 1^st, 2009 at 3:07am By: Poppy
Moved: 'A Creation Story - Our Uni-verse' This Topic has been moved to Firebox (FB) by Normpo
My Tribute to Every Poet I Paraphrased He was my mentor, jtb, who referenced the Robert Service poem, "My Book". He and Service's poem inspired this: Please do read Service's "My Book" first. Google Robert Service and you'll find... Started Nov 21^st, 2009 at 11:33pm by jgdittier	5	33	Nov 22^nd, 2009 at 11:08pm By: jgdittier
Only a Fairy Tale... I'll tell a tale, unheard, not stale, where bashful beaux abound... With female, frail, our hero, hale, and parlous plot, profound. With widened eyes, you'll suffer sighs, and... Started Mar 20^th, 2007 at 5:22pm by jgdittier	10	65	Mar 26^th, 2007 at 5:30pm By: percephanie
just friends play your modest guitar, paint your walls til they shine, croon of lonliness, but never lonely. impassioned with correct pronunciation of how many languages, racing the cheetahs<b... Started Nov 23^rd, 2008 at 11:54am by chanafrumin	4	45	Dec 29^th, 2008 at 6:02pm By: Just_Daniel
Book Jacket Book Jacket Children choose books by their jackets; drawn by impact of bright colours, glossy pictures, rarely considering what’s inside cardboard covers. Was t... Started May 16^th, 2008 at 4:34am by nas	9	98	May 17^th, 2008 at 5:08am By: nas
Some 60 Word Prose Pieces In CA Diane and I were talking about flash fiction and I said I'd post some of my 60 word fiction pieces. So here they are. Prophecy Drums roll as the clan gathers around the flickering fir... Started Apr 7^th, 2007 at 4:09pm by nas	3	28	Apr 7^th, 2007 at 8:15pm By: diehard
Cinematic I’m not likely to forget the way your hand looked on the video. I never realized how large it was, naked against the crook of my waist – it was a whipped cream and ch... Started Mar 22^nd, 2008 at 12:34am by duetsdove	10	66	Apr 1^st, 2008 at 2:19pm By: DianeEsk
Wannabe Sonnet I have a neighbor no one wants to share When she doth traipse around us in full view While wearing nothing but her underwear. I promise I don’t know just what to do. Sometimes she... Started Feb 19^th, 2007 at 9:09pm by diehard	10	82	Feb 21^st, 2007 at 8:56pm By: percephanie
Sword Zephyr Sword Zephyr By F. Lee Jennings ©2008 All Copyrights remain with the author. In glimpses I saw it, as of an apparition, a vortex transparency reflecting meager specks of light.<br ... Started Aug 22^nd, 2008 at 7:21pm by clawmute	3	51	Aug 31^st, 2008 at 7:59am By: eric_never
She Is Retreat - Part One of a Four Day Memoir Note: You may be seeing quite a few RETREAT poems from a few of us over the next days and weeks ~smile~. This one is about day one, Sunday - 4/22/07 She Is Retreat - Part One of a Four Day Memoir [i][b]Arrivals --- [...\|/i Started Apr 28^th, 2007 at 11:59pm by Normpo	4	109	May 6^th, 2007 at 9:28am By: nas
LOVE CONQUERS ALL This was sort of inspired by a thread here: Without Definitive Delineation by duetsdove. LOVE CONQUERS ALL The urge to do battle can be quite inviting. But love conquers all <br /... Started Jul 22^nd, 2008 at 5:53pm by writer	5	71	Jun 6^th, 2015 at 1:04pm By: Normpo
"untitled" I was a wife to a King who stabbed me with a blunted knife, and led me to my innocent death. Reborn today there’s no such King but a Queen of Queen’s slices off my head. ... Started May 20^th, 2008 at 2:55am by BhindBlueEyes	4	51	Jun 6^th, 2008 at 5:22pm By: DianeEsk
Sold Out Note: For writer (written many years ago) Sold Out About to take a trip, back to her high school reunion. my love, and my wife, desperately fingers through ... Started Aug 18^th, 2008 at 1:52am by Normpo	5	46	Aug 18^th, 2008 at 6:03am By: nas
Almost Sonnets Almost Sonnets Attend to me with lucid majesty, and sprinkle dust from Eros on my limbs. You shall not brush them off or else I'd die; so gently trace the grains between the lin... Started Sep 6^th, 2008 at 2:20am by Normpo	3	40	Sep 6^th, 2008 at 5:52am By: nas
Plymouth Note - this is circa 2001 -- with Patrice and Rene chatting ofetn about "Plymouth", I dug this up. Plymouth I don't know if I was 16 or 20, but my dad bought a Plymouth. I rem... Started Aug 10^th, 2008 at 3:42pm by Normpo	7	56	Aug 11^th, 2008 at 7:48am By: claw
idfluenced idfluenced too obsessed with the idea that i'd be able to seperate my self idly standing by, like the idiot i am, ... Started Mar 24^th, 2012 at 1:45am by Normpo	3	32	Mar 28^th, 2012 at 10:14am By: WildCityWoman
Ecola Lookout Over Crescent Beach Ecola Lookout Over Crescent Beach On a man-made observation point overlooking Crescent Beach, the Pacific’s low-tide rippled waves begin their approach almost equal-distant from each ... Started Mar 14^th, 2012 at 9:50pm by Normpo	9	51	Mar 28^th, 2012 at 10:40am By: WildCityWoman
Hattu Sherritt Ye ole Villanelle Whoever thought you up, oh villanelle, – professor, sadist, joker of renown – is hopefully ensconced somewhere in hell. To read one isn’t bad, as you can tell;<... Started Sep 13^th, 2009 at 3:12pm by Merlin	5	19	Jun 13^th, 2015 at 2:02pm By: Normpo
Finding Time... Life is death that we've felt in life deep within our soggy dreams soaked with the perspiration of our wildest aspirations wet with stale ideas of greatness or perhaps the... Sorry, a thirty second blurb I just wrote while on bre Started Oct 28^th, 2005 at 8:19pm by madpoetx	5	57	Nov 10^th, 2005 at 12:30am By: fightingpandas
Tessellations Note: Not many folks in CA these days, so to get some impulse feedback, I might post a few of my dailies here as well. Anyone recognize this sonnet form? [IMAGE] Started Aug 7^th, 2009 at 10:54am by Normpo	2	23	Aug 9^th, 2009 at 10:41pm By: Poppy
2 * A Love Poem In these moments of quiet, it all comes together. As a breath from the sky, it happens naturally, gently. You capture the sun, find a new freedom. It is a beautiful way to liv... Started Jul 23^rd, 2009 at 2:45am by peach	4	9	Jul 24^th, 2009 at 12:38am By: peach
he leaves her lonely He leaves her lonely when he leaves not knowing Close the style she believes like a moment of real to smile her way listening care fully all she has to say ... Started Jul 8^th, 2012 at 7:35am by chanafrumin	3	39	Jul 29^th, 2012 at 5:15am By: davidf
CHASED TITTY CHASED TITTY He mastered his ego and ditto his id; when it came to libido it mastered his bid. he mastered his woman, she mistressed her man; when it came to her bra... Started Aug 23^rd, 2004 at 7:05am by alanmdouglas	3	60	Aug 24^th, 2005 at 7:31pm By: madpoetx

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