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This forum is for COMMENT ONLY. When posting a poem here, please do NOT request critique; when responding or offering a comment, please DO NOT ever offer critique. Post your poems in On Track or Firebox ONLY for critique. You may, if you wish, post a poem concurrently in Main Line and On Track as long as you adhere to the posting rules in each forum Posting Rules:You may post 1 piece each day but you must FIRST respond to at least 2 other poems in this forum before posting again.

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KURT To all...been so long since I have written anything, I thought I ought to let you know I'm still alive, even this short thing. As usual criticism welcomed. KURT Often angry; never mad.... Started Oct 2^nd, 2008 at 9:15pm by ace	10	63	Jul 14^th, 2011 at 9:02am By: Normpo
Mature at Last Mature At Last I have the right to be a contrarian Since, after all, I'm a octogenerian. ace Started Oct 28^th, 2009 at 8:53pm by ace	2	4	Nov 2^nd, 2009 at 11:20pm By: Normpo
Advice ADVICE Life should be lived with a luminous lilt, an amorphous, anarchistic, sharp angled tilt. A life lived in reticent quietude with constant smiles and a right attitude... So there! ace Started Jul 27^th, 2009 at 8:49pm by ace	8	61	Aug 3^rd, 2009 at 8:22pm By: ace
MEDIAPHRENIA This one's just for fun, but I still will appreciate comments or suggestions. I think I wrote it mainly so I could make the rhyme in lines 13-14. MEDIAPHRENIA There is one highly secret ... Started Jun 9^th, 2009 at 8:25pm by ace	8	61	Jun 29^th, 2009 at 8:04pm By: jgdittier
Skyline View Skyline View White clouds stripe the sky as a jet skis beneath them heading o'er mountains. Corrected per note from writer. ace Started Mar 18^th, 2009 at 10:14pm by ace	9	67	Jun 27^th, 2009 at 11:58pm By: LSwordsonfoot
New Hampshire aftermath. This one's purely for fun. Daniel, I know you are the master of limerick so be kind. I awoke this morning having to fund a use for these rhymes. There once was a woman named Hilla... Started Mar 21^st, 2008 at 7:34pm by ace	9	9	Jan 12^th, 2008 at 9:45am By: Just_Daniel
Iraq My friend is, sadly, dead. He died in a fire fight twixt a Sunni and a Shite. darn war! Thought something should go to post in rememberance of Armistice Day (Veteran's Day to you yougsters). Though... Started Nov 10^th, 2006 at 3:41am by ace	5	53	Dec 7^th, 2006 at 2:47am By: Normpo
AT NIGHT The sun rises from the ground, shedding bright and healing light, relieving sadness for the day, but grief will return at night. Services were held at noon; unheard condolenc... Started Aug 8^th, 2003 at 4:00am by ace	13	124	Sep 20^th, 2006 at 3:30pm By: sierra
Lost Soliloquy (Sonnet) Lost Soliloquy “Never asked, why did our paths intersect? Did I have reasons to go out that night? Selfish lives, meshed, then seen in retrospect, Refocus sight that made it all se... Started Mar 17^th, 2009 at 8:13pm by acricket	4	28	Apr 5^th, 2009 at 12:37pm By: acricket
So Far Away This topic has been moved to On Track by nas. Started Jan 16^th, 2007 at 7:56pm by ajduke	0	14	Jan 16^th, 2007 at 9:56pm By: ajduke
RAP-OFF RAP-OFF Hark, the herald adverts sing, these toys are the latest thing; peace ’fore dawn, your happy child, if from us you presents buyed. Early children all will rise, e... Started Dec 19^th, 2004 at 9:28am by alanmdouglas	12	110	Dec 10^th, 2006 at 11:23am By: writer
FINE CUISINE FINE CUISINE Appetizers and sake sesame toast, fragrant rice Red curry, squid, ice cream Thai finery with orchids Then unlimited coffee and battered credit card Alan... Started Jul 18^th, 2006 at 11:40am by alanmdouglas	4	33	Jul 22^nd, 2006 at 8:31pm By: alanmdouglas
GROWING UP GROWING UP I always believed in God, Motherhood, and Apple Pie, until I had some .... Alan McAlpine Douglas Started Apr 28^th, 2006 at 11:34am by alanmdouglas	10	15	May 14^th, 2006 at 9:14am By: alanmdouglas
CLERIHEWS FOND BLONDE Marilyn Monroe would have a go with any non-resident as long as he was, or might be, president .... WELL HE WOULD, WOULDN'T HE Clint Eastwood did all a m... Started Feb 15^th, 2006 at 10:32pm by alanmdouglas	10	17	Mar 7^th, 2006 at 4:15am By: Normpo
CHASED TITTY CHASED TITTY He mastered his ego and ditto his id; when it came to libido it mastered his bid. he mastered his woman, she mistressed her man; when it came to her bra... Started Aug 23^rd, 2004 at 7:05am by alanmdouglas	3	60	Aug 24^th, 2005 at 7:31pm By: madpoetx
Loves dream I gave my heart so freely, to a love within my dreams. Dreams that grew as i grew, dreams that seemed so real. Eyes now open seeing, the smoke from dreams still clouding.<br /... Started May 4^th, 2008 at 12:37am by amina1126	5	7	May 6^th, 2008 at 12:55pm By: Normpo
mouthing off *Mouthing Off* Saccharine yet believable these truncated assertions forcing hands goading nothing but the truth Asinine yet decievable these deflated insertions... Started Apr 10^th, 2012 at 7:11pm by Amrot	4	10	Jul 27^th, 2012 at 8:29am By: Pen
What Happens To Two *What Happens To Two* Numbed Fenced in Left longing Passed over once Ignored completely Disassembled Divided Broken One Started Apr 28^th, 2012 at 7:06pm by Amrot	5	46	May 25^th, 2012 at 4:58am By: icepoet
a written response to a verbal slap *a written response to a verbal slap* I know I've heard it all, the worst, kind of banality of choice one makes, expressed in badgering retorts intent on ruining the mo... Started Apr 9^th, 2012 at 5:17am by Amrot	2	18	Apr 10^th, 2012 at 4:04pm By: Amrot
Being Frank Waking, a half conscious journey to morning rituals Shadows that mark places to avoid are in memory only The loud greeting while the house sleeps need not be hushed Greenest eyes pleadi... Started Sep 16^th, 2008 at 11:10pm by amygtz	9	60	Sep 17^th, 2008 at 1:14pm By: amygtz
Parallel Horizons Not my usual type of poetry, but I think it is one of my better ones. Having looked over this forum before posting anything, i ahve a rather large inferiority complex already. My work is not really on... Started Dec 21^st, 2005 at 9:02am by AngelicPhantom	1	3	Feb 4^th, 2006 at 6:38pm By: dowling1996
Once Had Wings... not really that good...but feedback would be nice...i was kind of experimenting with rhyming and playing around. I once could fly But now my wings are dead. I broke out of the dark and ... Started Jan 8^th, 2006 at 4:03pm by AngelicPhantom	2	27	Jan 18^th, 2006 at 10:38pm By: Normpo
False Senses False Senses Driving down the interstate with the windows rolled down Blazing tresses swirling and swaying in the wind A mind conflicted; perpetual chagrin Rows of fields and tele... Started Jun 3^rd, 2007 at 3:27am by Anthy (Ex Member)	4	46	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Anthy - Ex Member
Giving This is the first sonnet I ever completed, at least I think I completed. Enjoy! Arise, my dear, from careless summer dreams, Take up your net. Fly up to catch the stars, Pursue the li... Started Feb 10^th, 2007 at 10:05pm by Apollos_Lyric (Ex Member)	1	6	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: Normpo
Warm November Well it's been about 2 years since I've written, let alone posted anything. Some of you may remember me as Deran, Solstyce, Midnight's Son, i've had several names as I've grown older, maybe wiser. Thi... Started Jan 7^th, 2007 at 9:55am by Apollos_Lyric (Ex Member)	3	5	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: rherring - Ex Member

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