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This forum is for COMMENT ONLY. When posting a poem here, please do NOT request critique; when responding or offering a comment, please DO NOT ever offer critique. Post your poems in On Track or Firebox ONLY for critique. You may, if you wish, post a poem concurrently in Main Line and On Track as long as you adhere to the posting rules in each forum Posting Rules:You may post 1 piece each day but you must FIRST respond to at least 2 other poems in this forum before posting again.

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Smile or Groan Midsummer Night Poems for Winter Reading Five Humorous (I hope) poems written after seeing Shakespeare's "Midsummer Night's Dream." These all date back to 2003 >>>You'll either smile or groan, I suspect! Midsummer #1: As the sta... Started Jan 7^th, 2020 at 7:11pm by Normpo	0	109	Jan 7^th, 2020 at 7:11pm By: Normpo
Writing Helps (Coupletameter) Writing Helps if you are blue it helps to write e’en something trite because it often spreads a cloud from ‘round our heads head off this cunning, baffling... Started Dec 18^th, 2019 at 10:07pm by Just_Daniel	0	111	Dec 18^th, 2019 at 10:07pm By: Just_Daniel
Remembering Kristallnacht (Also see Reed's Poem Here Also) Kristallnacht Re-visioned (1) Belie the truth, and year after year it magnifies what people fear. Unlike a mirror, twice the size, reflecting back, some don't realize that wha... Started Nov 10^th, 2019 at 4:31pm by Normpo	0	95	Nov 10^th, 2019 at 4:31pm By: Normpo
If I Were Thin (a roundel) a roundel If I Were Thin If I were thin, I'd walk once more without this walker or chagrin and it would not be such a chore if I were thin. My eyes are dull, and even when<br /... Started Jun 15^th, 2018 at 8:23pm by Just_Daniel	0	110	Jun 15^th, 2018 at 8:23pm By: Just_Daniel
STOPPING BY A CLASSIC ON A WINTER DAY Some time ago I found myself with little to do and lots of time left in which to do it. So I wrote this. Eventually I wrote half a dozen parodies of Mr Frost's poem. I'll probably pay for it in the af... Started Mar 30^th, 2018 at 3:41am by writer	0	88	Mar 30^th, 2018 at 3:41am By: writer
ON BEING EXTANT It's been a while since I've been on the train as anyone other than an observer. I've been missing it, so here's a little sumpin-sumpin. ON BEING EXTANT Them dinosaurs, they must have stinke... Started Mar 20^th, 2018 at 10:40pm by writer	0	56	Mar 20^th, 2018 at 10:40pm By: writer
Candle Wrote this as a teenager upon the loss of my grandmother. I changed the pronouns to 1st person plural (instead of the original 1si person singular) so it is more generic. It's not "great poetry" (wri... Started Feb 25^th, 2018 at 12:26am by Normpo	0	50	Feb 25^th, 2018 at 12:26am By: Normpo
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TO A PLATYPUS (major revision) This was written a couple of years ago...and I was never quite happy or satisfied with it. With my thinking about Ogden Nash and sonnets I decided the subject matter lent itself to that form better... Started Mar 30^th, 2009 at 4:22pm by writer	0	13	Mar 30^th, 2009 at 4:22pm By: writer
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So Far Away This topic has been moved to On Track by nas. Started Jan 16^th, 2007 at 7:56pm by ajduke	0	14	Jan 16^th, 2007 at 9:56pm By: ajduke
Purged This topic has been moved to On Track by Normpo. Started Dec 8^th, 2006 at 7:52pm by Normpo	0	36	Dec 8^th, 2006 at 9:52pm By: Normpo
The letter This topic has been moved to On Track by azurepoetry. Started Nov 30^th, 2006 at 4:52pm by Terence	0	66	Nov 30^th, 2006 at 6:52pm By: Terence
C eh N eh D eh ~ sestina collaboration We wear toques and hand-chewed mukluk boots when we travel from our icy igloos, by dogsled or skidoos, to hear nothing's new. Line up at horny tim's for an hour, for regular, double double,<... Started Feb 10^th, 2007 at 10:29pm by Pen	0	4	Oct 5^th, 2006 at 3:16pm By: Pen
Something Of Mine This topic has been moved to On Track by azurepoetry. Started Sep 4^th, 2006 at 12:35am by MoonSlave	0	28	Sep 4^th, 2006 at 2:35am By: MoonSlave
"Poets" This topic has been moved to On Track by Normpo. Started Mar 4^th, 2006 at 5:11am by Poetlines	0	53	Mar 4^th, 2006 at 7:11am By: Poetlines
Amaranths (This is old - Circa 1974 -- no laughing, please) Your Amaranths You long to hear the night stars whisper Through tangled branches of a private park; Night dreams are paced to life's own footsteps, Ti... Started Feb 10^th, 2007 at 9:59pm by Normpo	0	2	Oct 27^th, 2005 at 7:18pm By: Normpo
Re: At The River's Edge Hi Pejj. You posted this one in the Main Line. Your not allowed to give an in depth comment in this section. If your looking for a critique , you should move it to On Track. I like the line... Started Jun 25^th, 2005 at 2:22pm by Thumbelina	0	37	Jun 26^th, 2005 at 2:03am By: Thumbelina
Peeking Hearts If only hearts eye could peek over times gate. At glimpses of events to transpire, the realm of fate. My lot today then, would be yesterday’s devise. I’d be in sweet existence, masterin... Started Feb 10^th, 2007 at 10:07pm by bonita	0	8	May 4^th, 2005 at 6:02pm By: bonita
Why Bother? This is kind of a rollercoaster of a poem... it might shock you, it might liberate you, it might even be about you... so sit back and enjoy, it will all be over soon! LOL Another day, another dol... Started Feb 10^th, 2007 at 10:13pm by pain_saber (Ex Member)	0	16	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: pain_saber - Ex Member
Why My Horse Stutters This topic has been moved to On Track by duetsdove. Started Jun 30^th, 2007 at 12:13am by cornhusker (Ex Member)	0	37	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: cornhusker - Ex Member
Wait . We got so high this weekend that now i'm going through a deep funk trying to get back in the swing of things. I can't belive that we've all left Richmond and now we l... Started Feb 10^th, 2007 at 10:07pm by stainyellowincolor (Ex Member)	0	34	Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am By: stainyellowincolor - Ex Member

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