Soft is the foundation of my love for you
Not soft like the body of a worm
But rather as the warm summer breeze
Gently caressing your skin

Light is the foundation of my love for you
Not light like downy feathers
But rather as the glow from a setting sun
Creating a halo of your hair

Strong is the foundation of my love for you
Not strong like grey unyielding concrete
But rather as the web appears to the fly
Intricate and inescapable

I know; no punctuation. I'd be grateful for suggestions.