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Reply #5 - Jul 29th, 2012 at 3:38pm
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Thank heavens!  This was the first thread I opened up and wondered if I'd missed the boat on all my sonnet lessons.  Not that I'm a pro at them ... not a bit of it.   However, I did like this for the modern flavour.
  
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Reply #4 - Apr 16th, 2012 at 4:55pm
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OMG - it's more than 14 lines - why did I do that - two sonnets? Maybe it should be I & II, like everything else is with me.

  
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Reply #3 - Apr 16th, 2012 at 4:54pm
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Well, what are ya' lookin' for, Prof?

14 lines, right?

Syllable count off?

That's why I'm here - lemme' know.

  
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Reply #2 - Apr 12th, 2012 at 12:33am
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Hmmm -- I do see the acrostic --- but not the sonnet? But I like it anyway  ~smile~ 

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Reply #1 - Apr 11th, 2012 at 11:49pm
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Carly,
Good poem...I know it annot be easy to combine a sonnet and an acrostic, and like I said in the Short-line thread...it is nice I could be of some inspiration.
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Mar 27th, 2012 at 6:16pm
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SIDEREAL SNOWFALL - POETICAL HOWL

Silent is night 'neath star-spackled heavens
In tandem, earth reels with the galaxy. 
Daughters of the north hearth shiver; husbands
engage strong sons at cuts of fallen trees.
Roaring fires render winter's cruelty 
essentially helpless. In plaintiff call,
a lone wolf howls its song, 'cross the snowy 
limbo of dreams, like life in a glass ball. 


Sleep comes easy out there in the woodlands, 
'neath eiderdown and old pine; big cities 
of the world seem nothing more than craven 
waxwork, destined to poison minds - dis-ease 
for the lonely heart - tempest for the naive 
adolescents who yearn for bright lights, all 
lingering at the edge of a lazy
limbo of dreams, like life in a glass ball. 


Pander me not with the palaverin'
on all of the latest amenities
enshrined in the suburbs, the exurbs and
tenpenny bullfeather bureaucracies.
I would, if given my druthers or leave,
choose to be right out there under the all
absorbing awe, this star-tangled hazy
limbo of dreams, like life in a glass ball.


Hearken the call to the northland, take ease
on a down-feathered bed. As the snow falls,
we shall turn, in tune with the galaxy's
limbo of dreams, like life in a glass ball. 

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