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Normpo Topic Starter Forum Administrator Offline Posts: 10830 Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	Re: To Sleep Inside Your Eyes Reply #6 - Jul 29^th, 2012 at 5:11pm	Print Post
	Hey -- every "love experience" need not wind up witn a "conception" LOL. (yeah -- that was bad). Norm


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Pen Full Member Offline Posts: 255 Location: Ladysmith V.I. B.C. Joined: Jul 31^st, 2003	Re: To Sleep Inside Your Eyes Reply #5 - Jul 29^th, 2012 at 4:09pm	Print Post
	Even if I was pretending [as you suggest in a most encouraging way] I'd still have to get my mind wrapped around the concept. chuckle


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Normpo Topic Starter Forum Administrator Offline Posts: 10830 Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	Re: To Sleep Inside Your Eyes Reply #4 - Jul 29^th, 2012 at 4:02pm	Print Post
	Pen, ".. if I ever could get my mind wrapped around the concept of love in this capacity" --- Well, how about pretending ~smile~ Norm


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Pen Full Member Offline Posts: 255 Location: Ladysmith V.I. B.C. Joined: Jul 31^st, 2003	Re: To Sleep Inside Your Eyes Reply #3 - Jul 29^th, 2012 at 3:40pm	Print Post
	Now this is the sort of sonnet I'd love to write if I ever could get my mind wrapped around the concept of love in this capacity.


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WildCityWoman Supreme Member Offline Yeah - me again! Still rockin'! Posts: 4415 Location: Toronto, Canada Joined: Sep 19^th, 2003	Re: To Sleep Inside Your Eyes Reply #2 - Mar 29^th, 2012 at 2:44pm	Print Post
	I love that idea - to sleep inside your eyes. I won't offer critique on the sonnet form itself - it looks ok to me. Reads well.


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Wordhearder Full Member Offline May Earthbound Peace Be Our Awakening Posts: 122 Location: Fall River, MA Joined: Jan 6^th, 2011	Re: To Sleep Inside Your Eyes Reply #1 - Mar 27^th, 2012 at 2:04am	Print Post
	I love this Norm...lived it once...we can't unknow once we know...but does that infer ingnorance may be bliss? Tim


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Normpo Topic Starter Forum Administrator Offline Posts: 10830 Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	To Sleep Inside Your Eyes Mar 3^rd, 2012 at 4:40pm	Print Post
	To Sleep Inside Your Eyes * Is your pure love transparent to me yet? Once far away from close, we now are near this special view so far from where we met. No longer blurred, it all is now so clear. But I have longed to sleep inside your eyes * to see the me that lives inside your dreams. The mask removed, no longer in disguise, I could observe if all is as it seems. But what if when I focus in that lens, the vision that is set before me there exposes that "I love you's" were pretends... and all this time I was so unaware. Oh no, please make that nightmare go away; it's better that outside your lids I stay. * Inspired by this line from a poem written by Mary: “I have slept inside your eyes;”


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