Thanks for sharing your song, 

I like the way you organized it, with the negative in the middle line surrounded by positive otherwise.   

It conveys clear meaning.  I can appreciate it. 

Thanks, 
jdh

Hello, I'm a new member and I'd like comments on a song that I wrote sometime back. I hope that  you guys will like it.

                          Lookin' for a new Love

               Can you change this broken heart
                        with a loving happy one
                             full of joy and life?
                    Not to turn to hurt nor pain
                       but to uplift my strength
                           and regain my love.

                   Are you seeking that one love
                        just a special kind of hon
                               with a lot of fun?
                            Not to let you down
                              but to be around
                              with lots of hope
                             and a lasting love.