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Re: Kristallnacht Re-visioned - A Tryptich
Reply #3 - Sep 10th, 2019 at 2:10pm
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Very well written, Norm.  Message received on both parts.  The rondeau form that you used in the first poem is interesting, but that particular variety is unfamiliar to me.  deLightingly, Daniel  Cool
  
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Reply #2 - Nov 11th, 2018 at 12:39am
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Thanks for your comments, Yvonne.
  
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Reply #1 - Nov 10th, 2018 at 9:03pm
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I read in the news yesterday about Angela Merkel sending out a warning or something about racism during an event commemorating the 80th anniversary of the "Night of Broken Glass".  I followed the link you provided to Wikipedia and learned about it .  I've heard the stories, watched the movies and read in books about the Holocaust.  I venture to say that the actions of humanity have reached peak absurdity to try and deny this happened, or even try to diminish the importance and impact of this part of history for future generations.  It always makes me really depressed and full of fear to read about the suffering.  Some part of me knows this could happen to anyone at any time.  All it would take is another magnetic leader to work the magic.  That being said, I can't say that I enjoyed reading the poems, mostly because of the unpleasant feelings they evoked, but they were keen in doing that  Wink  However,  the three are a thing of beauty, nonetheless, because they combine to bring us a true story. 

I really like how you honed in on the glass theme throughout.  Even though the setting changes, the ending had me thinking of weathered glass that has lost its edge or ability to cut and cause harm or pain, and also an image of a watered down version of the truth.  The truth sometimes hurts and is ugly.  I think the revisionist thought is to pretty it up with a "veneer", a concise description, because people can't handle the truth.  You ask, "Where is the truth?"  That is so sad.  It can be buried by time, apathy and then re-emerge as a new truth which is actually a lie!

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Kristallnacht Re-visioned - A Tryptich
Nov 9th, 2018 at 11:35pm
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Kristallnacht Re-visioned (1)

Belie the truth, and year after year
it magnifies what people fear.
Unlike a mirror, twice the size,
reflecting back, some don't realize
that what they're told is not sincere.

History's paint brush’ll often smear
the truth until it disappears.
So much spoken under the guise
of fact. Where is the truth?

Verity's covered by veneer,
so slickly offered as "crystal clear."
Its colored, distorted, twisted, revised.

Time and events will disappear,
never to know what underlies
the truth.

Kristallnacht Re-visioned (2)

History’s senseless, hateful incision
Allowed by humanity’s indecision
From the shattered glass, Israel has risen
New birth, new covenant, a new circumcision
With faith and duty we must fight revision.


Kristallnacht Re-visioned (3)

Tongue extended, looking skyward,
I spot a six-pointed flake
landing and melting
our innocence away.
The blood-stained snow
beneath a history lesson’s boots
cannot be typed for purity 
while droplets 
from the eyes of the watchers
dry unnoticed.

Scattered further still
from the windswept mountains,
millions of broken shards as markers,
they’re etched on dunes…
the Diaspora sculpted.
We try to read what's written on the sand.

Tides change
and on Mediterranean beaches 
hollow castles
will be washed away
unless we remember
to save their names,
to save the grains
from the undertow of apathy
that would have us forget
the "Never Again".

© Norman S. Pollack    November 8, 1998

Note: 

This triptych* I wrote in 1998 on the 60th anniversary of Kristallnacht – November 8, 1938. We have seen a very disturbing phenomenon taking place in the last 25 years>>>it’s called Holocaust denial or revisionism. I linked these two themes into the three poems. There are two Internet links below this that are good reference points for these poems regarding Holocaust revisionism and Kristallnacht. I have used symbols and images of “Crystal Night” and the Holocaust that I think you might recognize. The first poem is in Rondeau form. The second a single rhyme sound for all 5 lines. The third is written in free verse.

I would love to hear any comments you may have.

*Triptych - a set of three associated artistic, literary, or musical works intended to be appreciated together

Revisionism:
https://guides.lib.jjay.cuny.edu/c.php?g=288386&p=1922632

Kristallnacht:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kristallnacht


  
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