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davidf Supreme Member Offline I love YaBB 1G - SP1! Posts: 1158 Joined: Oct 25^th, 2007	Re: Poetic Creme Brulee in this Cafe (Poetica) CA Run 11 of 15 - 2015 Reply #4 - Jul 5^th, 2015 at 1:18pm	Print Post
	Norm, A fine piece of poetry! ~Davidf


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Normpo Topic Starter Forum Administrator Offline Posts: 10830 Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	Re: Poetic Creme Brulee in this Cafe (Poetica) CA Run 11 of 15 - 2015 Reply #3 - Jul 5^th, 2015 at 12:19pm	Print Post
	You two guys probably recall I've written a "few" poems regarding "diving deep" into my "Lake Metaphor" ~smile~ Norm


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nas Supreme Member Offline I love YaBB 1G - SP1! Posts: 9444 Joined: Sep 11^th, 2006	Re: Poetic Creme Brulee in this Cafe (Poetica) CA Run 11 of 15 - 2015 Reply #2 - Jun 14^th, 2015 at 8:54am	Print Post
	not too much peeling needed to get a message from this and it is very cleverly done. Some people never go beyond the sugary crust and word play.


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Tim Supreme Member Offline Posts: 4134 Location: near dusk with a halo of gnats Joined: Nov 3^rd, 2005	Re: Poetic Creme Brulee in this Cafe (Poetica) CA Run 11 of 15 - 2015 Reply #1 - Jun 13^th, 2015 at 6:16pm	Print Post
	or more head-scratching. Ya never know. I'm re-appreciating (?) form poetry. And I'm very happy I know poets like you who like poetry like that (start peeling...) Namaste, ~Tim


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Normpo Topic Starter Forum Administrator Offline Posts: 10830 Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	Poetic Creme Brulee in this Cafe (Poetica) CA Run 11 of 15 - 2015 Jun 13^th, 2015 at 3:14pm	Print Post
	Note -- I have been drowning in work the past days so I am catching up on my run of 15 -- posting 3 more today and hopefully 2 tomorrow. Just having fun with form poetry -- some forms I haven't played with in a while. Poetic Creme Brulee in this Cafe (Poetica) Some poems are like a creme brulee, with sugar torched on top, displayed. That sweetest crust is there to say, "Crack me open, beneath this lays a message just as sweet;" Some way, when sweetness is all peeled away, beneath the humor of word play, we'll find deep thought in this Cafe.


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