a bit of rearranging and alternate word choice


terrifying the form seen within the decaying detritus 
of a basement floor. A maw opened warning, strategically placed 

in the mélange of skeletal remains, the pounding pulse 
of horror, resounding louder and deeper, than the moan beneath 

what presence—threatens where even shadows are overtaken? 
what vestige of import shaken, driven as if from a world lost?

spewed as useless spawn to germinate, spidery shoots
reseed and roam as the ooze of regurgitate bilious, and malodorous as carrion. 

to  fester as any random, ugly fear, concentrated and dwelled upon,
teetering and groundless as ones own dive into madness

the ghoulish seething hunger that gnaws into the psyche 
of an otherwise undisturbed reality


I also see a poem in your preamble...

Removed by Author, 4.19.10