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Reply #6 - Nov 16th, 2011 at 5:42am
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A few rearrangements, only
  
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Reply #5 - Jan 16th, 2011 at 6:07pm
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I did enjoy this. It evoked those sweeping aerial shots of glaciers so loved by the makers of natural history films.
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Reply #4 - Jan 10th, 2011 at 5:40pm
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Peach,

This has to go on my favorites list.


Thanks for the post, beautifully done.


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Reply #3 - Apr 9th, 2010 at 5:09am
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Glad you enjoy the prompt challenges.  I will try to do them more regularly.  Of course if you wish to set one, feel free to do so.
  
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Reply #2 - Apr 9th, 2010 at 3:03am
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nas-glad you continued with the prompt phrase challenges--
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Reply #1 - Dec 22nd, 2009 at 5:54am
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Good use of the prompt phrases in this Peach.  It's fun to do.
  
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***    Ice land
Dec 21st, 2009 at 8:46pm
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The converge 
of old and new,
the perpetual crawl, 
through regions as ages, 
absorbed, imbued, 
pocketed as the grit
of squashed memories, 
their smothered weight, 
dragged forward
in infinitum.
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