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Re: Hey Sugar...
Reply #2 - May 15th, 2009 at 10:31pm
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sounds intriguing but needs... more...cook up some and invite us over...
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Re: Hey Sugar...
Reply #1 - May 15th, 2009 at 8:07pm
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It's been a long day and a few nights of poor sleep and daft dreams so maybe my brain isn't working as well as it should but I don't really understand this poem.  I like the first verse and how she lived up to her name but get lost in the salted and barbecued.
  
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Hey Sugar...
May 14th, 2009 at 9:42pm
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Her name was sugar
many things she boasted
offering friends and better looks
while sweetened  or frosted 

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called out salted
excitment  and high times
in places exalted


to become new
barbeque
Modestly called


enlightenment offered
mustard  and honey
  drawled

taste buds' campaign
to forget pain
transcend worlds
and end the mundane







  
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