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Just_Daniel Supreme Member Offline Slow down; things will go faster. ~ djr Posts: 8989 Location: South West New Jersey Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	double fib (at Wayne's request) Reply #8 - Jun 15^th, 2009 at 5:34pm	Print Post
	double fib it comes without much warning 'cause all of us have unexpected moments that spout out something we didn't expect to tell anyone but there it is, spread out in black and white and read all over... and we become red too but that's an antioxidant to help get rid of stress stored too long somewhere down deep where we've no active memory of any visit but now it's out; no denial... no darkened closet stifling us inside with fear _{© MLee Dickens'son 15 June 2009}


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writer Topic Starter Supreme Member Offline life is good! Posts: 3560 Location: Fridley, MN Joined: Nov 25^th, 2006	Re: FIBONACCI Reply #7 - Apr 7^th, 2009 at 1:43pm	Print Post
	Daniel, Shouldn't that be "tepee"...sans resevation, of course. Wayne
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Just_Daniel Supreme Member Offline Slow down; things will go faster. ~ djr Posts: 8989 Location: South West New Jersey Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	hair-razing... Reply #6 - Apr 7^th, 2009 at 1:53am	Print Post
	I will accept punishment sans reservations unless you are willing toupee


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writer Topic Starter Supreme Member Offline life is good! Posts: 3560 Location: Fridley, MN Joined: Nov 25^th, 2006	Re: FIBONACCI Reply #5 - Apr 6^th, 2009 at 7:11pm	Print Post
	Daniel, One MAY NOT say that without pun-ishment. Wayne


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Just_Daniel Supreme Member Offline Slow down; things will go faster. ~ djr Posts: 8989 Location: South West New Jersey Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	Well Reply #4 - Apr 6^th, 2009 at 3:09pm	Print Post
	Well Well I peeked in one of them too exuberantly and it pulled me right down inside where I would have fallen on my face had it not been for all the cool water that had accumulated within that old rock cylinder. My attempt at improving my image by getting closer to it might be considered a splash: One may wryly say: All's well that ends well!
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davidf Supreme Member Offline I love YaBB 1G - SP1! Posts: 1158 Joined: Oct 25^th, 2007	Re: FIBONACCI Reply #3 - Apr 5^th, 2009 at 7:24pm	Print Post
	Oops! I guess I typed that a little fast, I'm usually not that careless...thanks also for the "heads up" on the last line, that works for me.


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writer Topic Starter Supreme Member Offline life is good! Posts: 3560 Location: Fridley, MN Joined: Nov 25^th, 2006	Re: FIBONACCI Reply #2 - Apr 5^th, 2009 at 5:00am	Print Post
	A fine effort, David, Hard to argue wth the message. A couple of letters missing, but who's counting? lol The last line has one too many syllables...perhaps change "also" to "too"? writer


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davidf Supreme Member Offline I love YaBB 1G - SP1! Posts: 1158 Joined: Oct 25^th, 2007	Re: FIBONACCI Reply #1 - Apr 4^th, 2009 at 7:15pm	Print Post
	Here is my attempt: "Time Well Spent" If you pray to the Lord, you will be able to spend time with Him eternally in Heaven along with the angels and shepherds too. ~Davidf
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writer Topic Starter Supreme Member Offline life is good! Posts: 3560 Location: Fridley, MN Joined: Nov 25^th, 2006	Fibonacci Apr 4^th, 2009 at 5:38am	Print Post
	Again, from The Poets Garret: Fibonacci The renowned mathematician Fibonacci (c.1175 - c.1240) is responsible for this poetry form. He is responsible for the concept of a series of numbers produced from the sum of the two previous numbers. 1. 1. 2. 3. 5. 8. 13. 21. 34. etc… Poets who chose to use this form, need only decide whether to use syllables, (like the cinquain, etc) or words. Whichever is chosen it is an extremely impressive visual poem And my first attempt. THE UNKIND WELL One time I looked down a well and saw an image that required a bit of thought before I understood that it was me I saw there. I couldn’t understand why water in a well would be so unkind and age me so. writer
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