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Re: Shadorma ~ Form of the Month June 2009
Reply #23 - Jun 23rd, 2009 at 3:52pm
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down below
we gather phrases,
marveling
at the way
they're  turned so we can see them
from another side

  
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Re: Shadorma ~ Form of the Month June 2009
Reply #22 - Jun 23rd, 2009 at 9:59am
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from my cliff
I                      strew 
wondering
what seduced                            my
imagining their value
beyond journaling                                      scribblings
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Re: Shadorma ~ Form of the Month June 2009
Reply #21 - Jun 23rd, 2009 at 5:08am
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Nice effort...you don't see the word "kitsch" in poems often enough.
I once had a book titled "KITSCH: The World of Bad Taste" Loaned it out to someone.

Thanks for joining in the FOM.

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Re: Shadorma ~ Form of the Month June 2009
Reply #20 - Jun 23rd, 2009 at 1:35am
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Well I'll give this a stab in the dark ~ Cheesy

Thoughtfulness
passively in thought
reflective
pensively
my waste basket is my mate
kitsch trash black on white
  
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Re: Shadorma ~ Form of the Month June 2009
Reply #19 - Jun 4th, 2009 at 3:15pm
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Daniel,

You know, friend,
doing's not needed 
all the time.
Just being...
that can matter most of all
for those in your sphere.

Your presence,
us knowing you’re there..
that’s enough
to give us
a leg up in the morning
and a smile all day.

Wayne

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helpless of late...
Reply #18 - Jun 3rd, 2009 at 9:22pm
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It is true...
and I have been one
who has been
unable
to do much of anything
for those whom I love.
  
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Re: Shadorma ~ Form of the Month June 2009
Reply #17 - Jun 3rd, 2009 at 7:38pm
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Cynicism means
one thinks there's no hope.
Hope is there.
Disgust comes
in seeing those who know 
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in the end...
Reply #16 - Jun 3rd, 2009 at 3:39pm
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writer wrote on Jun 3rd, 2009 at 2:26pm:
I don't know...
cynicism seems
to require
too much time
and effort...disgust
is closer to what I feel.
and effort... more accurate
to call it disgust


I've disgust
many things with you;
we agree
on so much
I'd not try to dissuade you
of your conclusion.
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Re: Shadorma ~ Form of the Month June 2009
Reply #15 - Jun 3rd, 2009 at 2:26pm
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I don't know...
cynicism seems
to require
too much time
and effort...disgust
is closer to what I feel.
  
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hmmm....
Reply #14 - Jun 3rd, 2009 at 6:28am
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asses-sing
your poem
makes me think
cynical
is a vast understatement
of your point of view?
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Re: Shadorma ~ Form of the Month June 2009
Reply #13 - Jun 2nd, 2009 at 8:20pm
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Daniel,

encouraging
folks to make asses
of themselves
or plod on
with metronomic footsteps
to ancient graveyards.


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show your colors
Reply #12 - Jun 2nd, 2009 at 8:10pm
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Hey, y'all... wanted ya to know I'm thinkin' of ya.  Was sick Sunday afternoon and all day yesterday, but here I am acting as a poll-worker today, and this occurred to me:

primary
color selection
limited
to red, blue
for democratic process
in our republic
  
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Re: Shadorma ~ Form of the Month June 2009
Reply #11 - Jun 2nd, 2009 at 5:55pm
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peach,

Very nice...and very apt.

Thank you

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Re: Shadorma ~ Form of the Month June 2009
Reply #10 - Jun 2nd, 2009 at 4:18pm
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353375

much to see
much more to feel
a poem
a story
paints a picture into life
listen, hear a breath?
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Re: Shadorma ~ Form of the Month June 2009
Reply #9 - Jun 2nd, 2009 at 3:44pm
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Ren and peach,

There you go! Very nice contributions. Thank you for taking the time. Now, if Tim and Norm would slip into this thread...and a few others...

Wayne
  
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