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Who Says My Obligation Has Expired?
Reply #1 - Jul 28th, 2009 at 7:47am
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Who Says My Obligation Has Expired?

"The Beak" assigned a challenge way back when;
each class compiled the words. ( Say "homophone" )
We seventh graders beat the ninth… but then
my list alone edged theirs - won on my own!
That birthed a punning Jinn… and now he's grown.
In time he met a muse; soon they conspired
to twist my thinking, writing. ( Hear the groan? )
Methinks my obligation has expired.

I joined online critique; they tagged along.
Each time I learned a form, she mused… he bent.
As poetry (once hated) turned to song,
they stirred and hounded me till I was spent.
From time to time, of late, they'd been content
to positively share. ( Had they retired? )
I told them (even though they'd not relent)
"Look, guys, my obligation has expired!"

"Write freely, follow form, do parody,
pen stream-of-conscious… anything you want!"
I told myself… and did. They said, "You'll see."
I don't need them; I'm capable… I shan't
rely on them; I finally slowed down,
let days go by between when I desired.
Wrote serious again – far less the clown.
At last... my obligation had expired!

Another writing challenge came along;
I heard their strains again: they lute'd, lyre'd.
I took the bait, and louder rang their song…
At least that  obligation has expired…

but…
         my Jinn chants "Obligation must be sired.”
then Muse, “Our obligation must be fired.”
and both, “Your obligation’s not retired;
just face it, obligation ain’t expired.”


© Daniel J Ricketts 19 Dec 2003 
day 30 of a challenge to write a poem-a-day for 30 days
Rev. 22 Jan 2004

  
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Ballade
Aug 5th, 2003 at 3:14am
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Ballade

A Ballade consists of three stanzas, each of eight or ten iambic pentameter lines, along with a brief envoi.

All three stanzas and the envoi ending in the same one-line refrain

— The envoi is a closing stanza dedicating the poem to a patron or summarising its main ideas

The pattern is as such for all three stanzas and C2 is the refrain:

a b a b b c b C2

Envoi (4-line version): b c b C2

or 

Envoy (5-line version): b c c b C2

As is normal in rhyming poetry, no rhyming word can be repeated in the poem; this requirement makes the ballade something of a challenge in English, which is in general a rhyme-poor language.   The meter originally was iambic tetrameter, but any meter can be employed as long as it is used consistently throughout.  

Originally, the subjects of the ballade were serious philosophical, moral, or religious speculations.   Most often, the brevity of human life formed the subject.

The ballade in English is often used for comic purposes as well as serious meditation


Norman Rowland Gale's ballade is a good comic piece, this time one following the basic ballade pattern exactly:


"The Ballade of the Glutton" by Norman Rowland Gale

I'm greedy by nature, and often in vain 
Have lingered too long o'er the succulent hare, 
Accepting the jelly, ignoring the pain, 
Intent on receiving far more than my share. 
I worship the plover's egg, tasty and rare, 
And idolize fanciful French fricassees; 
But what, darling dainties, with you can compare, 
Soused salmon and lamb and young ducks and green peas? 

I ask for real turtle, again and again-- 
Observe the Lord Mayor's John Thomases* stare! [flunkies] 
For kitchen-recitals to Susan and Jane, 
And powdered impertinence, what do I care? 
I sit down to eat, and I vow and declare, 
I'd honour a dish were it made of stewed bees, 
Though loyal to you, should you chance to be there, 
Soused salmon and lamb and young ducks and green peas. 

I cherish a chef, be he Grecian or Dane; 
I even can relish a collop of bear; 
I love ev'ry calf--if it boasts a fine brain-- 
And melt at a pullet, or even a pair. 
Though gold's on the table and stately the fare, 
I greet a grand entree with almost a sneeze 
If you, dearest dainties, are sweet on the air-- 
Soused salmon and lamb and young ducks and green peas. 

L'envoi:
 
O Redcoats of England, who struggle and dare, 
Your glory's a morsel no glutton can please; 
My yearning is all for a soft-cushioned chair, 
Soused salmon and lamb and young ducks and green peas.


Take care.

alien
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